EmiAnne

I like it... =] Firefly is under appreciated.

Hellos! Thank you for commenting everybody... The formatting is weird (no quotes, 3rd person) because this was a part of my NaNo, with a character telling a story. I am ...

Yay! Thanks for the reviews from everyone so far, and I've edited it to make it less creepy and everything. I'm posting my next one soon, though, so be on ...

Hey everyone! Both parts of this have been revised & edited to make them so much better... but still tear the new versions to shreds, please. It helped a whole ...

Yay! thank you everyone for your reviews!

That was... interesting. I liked your idea of a vampire that hates it,and is trying to escape. (hmm... sound familiar? just stay away from names like Edward, Edwin, Jake/Jacob and ...

Thanks for all these responses! I can't believe I got so many of them at one time... and so fast! Thanks for my nitpicks and general plot suggestions, it really ...

Such a good story! I have to go... I'll give a full-er critique later...

little query: who's Elizabeth, and who's Adia? I'm sure that everybody but me gets it, but... I'm very confused.

That was such a cool story! I loved the way you developed Matt as the perfect guy the entire story, how she thinks she knows everything she needs to know, ...

i loved your story!!! i liked your magic and imagery. Tell me more about Amora and Aysel!!