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Re: Title Feedback
Brown bananas= rotten! Yellow bags? Well first off I think of le boƮte au lettre , because the mail boxes in France are all yellow, so says my book. Yellow ...
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Re: Title Feedback
Makes me think of teen/chick-lit. (otherwise known as young adult specifically for girls, like The Traveling Pants.) and this stacy girl is pop-u-lar! Everyone wants to be here, so she ...
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Re: First Paragraph Feedback
Its very....jumpy. One thing after another, and I have no idea what is going on. I almost think it is jumbled too. She shouts a lot, there is a lot ...
Apr 3, 2007 -
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Sounds childlike. Or perhaps it is a science manual set up in an unusual way? Impulse: Accepted
Apr 3, 2007 -
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Reminds me of viruses, or dying babies. (How morbid?) The word failure is so harsh, and cold, than something like "inability" or "not" even. Thrive is an amazing word. It's ...
Apr 3, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
[s]Reminds me of Who stole my cheese? purely because of its food connection. Probably wouldn't pick it up; too foolish. Might be a children's book, or something.[/s] Darn, I was ...
Apr 3, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
(Oh darn. I meant pair. I hate my spelling) I like the double entendre of the word "grave". Is she grave=sad, grave=ill, grave=...grave. xD Its unique in that form. And, ...
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
Too long...Though interesting enough. It makes me wonder, and that is enough to make me look at it long enough to wonder some more, and pick it up, and read ...
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
Very comical, although much too long. It could be condensed, or rather, set up differnetly. Questions from sidekicks: If I can blow up the world, why am I doing batman's ...
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
Pardon? My...what? Crazy woman. That's who you are. - Lev If you had to classify yourself into some scientific classification (of your choosing) what would you be? (Cal> That is ...
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: First Paragraph Feedback
The way it jumped right in with the description of Franz (Which makes me think of Kafka...) was really...catching, and I liked it that way. It completely grabbed me by ...
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: First Paragraph Feedback
Following Jenna's lead about titles, I'm starting a thread to get feedback on your first paragraph. Isn't that also something really important? It can make/break someones impression of the book. ...
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
Bless and broken sound good together, for obvious reasons. Its kind of saying do good to the bad person? But metaphorically. Doesn't really tell me anything about the story, but ...
Mar 31, 2007 -
Re: Language books?
Being the cheep-o I am, I found a few books on that satisfied (somewhat) my language craving. The German one was a dud, sadly. But my Russian book is great ...
Mar 30, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
A very prolific title. The book could be about a number of things. Spirituality, a romance, a horror, a vampire book. Could be anything. I would most likely pick it ...
Mar 29, 2007
