Emerson

Well, I'll say, I loved the voice, perfect. But it felt like the middle of the story, rather than a beginning. No real conflict, just pulling you into a scene. ...

Heh, that's a whole lot of info on the book? Eh, I've heard of The Uglies, and it sounds interesting, but I heard it wasn't quite so. Plus I am ...

Emo poetry just isn't original. *applauds* Or, which is another thing to consider, Emo poetry takes into no consideration the fundamental pieces of poetry: structure, rhythm, rhyme, flow, verses, and ...

I like the part before the colon. The explanation seems a lot longer than it should be. maybe just "Letters of forgiving". And then you hit into cliches, "Forgive and ...

Well, if you write an emotional poem and it still is beautiful, and is what a poem should be (causes the reader to also feel your emotions) and it is ...

It sounds intoxicating! Opium is a curious drug, and I always think of the 19th century since it was used then. They don't use it much now? It got turned ...

It's nice. Brings you into the story, suddenly but gently. It works. Sometimes I took the five finger discount on weight loss drugs from Walgreen's, and pretended to be the ...

I have memories connected to the name James, but I've always liked the name. It sounds strong. I imagine a blond, tough kid? The last name sounds pretty cool too. ...

I'd move this to writing tips, I think it goes there? But imp moved it here @_@ [and from where?] and she knows what she is doing. I ...would have ...

Sounds like a cute little Spanish kid, or something. Seems obviously male, with the "o" on the end, I guess I'm just used to it that way. If it were ...

Sounds like a short story title, because it is in itself sort of a story. It is part of a dialog. Doesn't tell much about the actual story though... If ...

It comes off like "Even if I tried" By: A neverending dream. It's really long... I probably wouldn't pick it up. Backstage Story

No. - Lev I am allergic to some types flower pollens. How ironic? *giggles* - Fleur Do you dance when no one is watching?

Salt makes me think of rubbing salt into wounds, and how that hurts really badly... But it might be a magic book? I probably wouldn't pick it up, or so ...

Is it just me, or has YWS gone on a little Russian craze lately, lol? I wouldn't doubt it... I'm reading If on a Winter's Night a Traveler by Italo ...