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  • General Fiction Novels Re: Swapping Your Blood with Formaldehyde (Part 1 and 2)

    Bonjour! So, I'm here a lot earlier than I thought I would be. You better love me a lot more than you did previously, or I'm just going to have ...

    Jun 13, 2008
  • WRFF Archive Re: I'm Hungry...

    Hullo J. ^_^ God Still Loves You (1) , er, and the subsequent parts. haha. There will be/are five parts in total, so yes, I am kind of asking for ...

    Jun 12, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Lover's Knot

    The first thing I want to address is punctuation. You don't have any, and I think the poem would benefit from the use of quotation marks - which is just ...

    Jun 12, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Anger

    Everyone's opinion before mine is great - so hopefully I can write a critique without repeating them. Consider my review just an extension of everyone else's words. Anger is orange. ...

    Jun 12, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey

    Hullo! Welcome to the Young Writers Society! I'm sure everyone else covered anything I might have, so I'll just say that if you do have any questions about the site ...

    Jun 11, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey

    Welcome to the site! I hate coming a few posts late. Everyone else seems to say anything I would have liked to say, and I'm rendered useless. But what can ...

    Jun 11, 2008
  • Novel Workshop Re: Suicide Kills Us All

    I know you wanted it all together! But I'm mean. I have some points to comment on, and I'll just do that here. Voice I know you've read Sparrows , ...

    Jun 11, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey Everyone

    Welcome to YWS! What genre do you like to write? I really hope you like YWS! But if you do have any questions or find yourself confused, feel free to ...

    Jun 11, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello Everyone

    Hello! Welcome to the YWS! So, Scifi? Who are your favorite authors? (I may not recognize them...heh.) If you have any questions about the site, or need help finding something, ...

    Jun 11, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: The Top 15 Reviewers of June Thus Far

    Nate: This is going to be the new reason why I neglect all my other responsibilities. I'd say thank you, but I'm not sure that's the right response. :P

    Jun 10, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Raisin Hell (1/2)

    Oooh my goodness Carl! [/love] that when he spoke waves of flesh rippled about his neck, trapping hapless insects and delinquent teenagers in its folds. This is why I miss ...

    Jun 10, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello

    Welcome to YWS! Romance, eh? :lol: Nice! If you have any questions about the site or need help finding your way around, feel free to PM me! How'd you find ...

    Jun 10, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Diamonds

    Hullo darling! I couldn't help but give my love... Diamonds bob playfully on little waves. They wink and twirl, bobbing underwater only to pop back up again. They make a ...

    Jun 10, 2008
  • Mod Squad Jungle Gym Re: The JM Banning Game

    Banned for being too awesome.

    Jun 10, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Lonely Girl

    Hello and Welcome to the Young Writers Society! First I would like to direct you to THE RULES . We have a rule about reviews and poems/stories posted. For everyone ...

    Jun 10, 2008


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