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Re: Swapping Your Blood with Formaldehyde (Part 1 and 2)
Bonjour! So, I'm here a lot earlier than I thought I would be. You better love me a lot more than you did previously, or I'm just going to have ...
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: I'm Hungry...
Hullo J. ^_^ God Still Loves You (1) , er, and the subsequent parts. haha. There will be/are five parts in total, so yes, I am kind of asking for ...
Jun 12, 2008 -
Re: Lover's Knot
The first thing I want to address is punctuation. You don't have any, and I think the poem would benefit from the use of quotation marks - which is just ...
Jun 12, 2008 -
Re: Anger
Everyone's opinion before mine is great - so hopefully I can write a critique without repeating them. Consider my review just an extension of everyone else's words. Anger is orange. ...
Jun 12, 2008 -
Re: Hey
Hullo! Welcome to the Young Writers Society! I'm sure everyone else covered anything I might have, so I'll just say that if you do have any questions about the site ...
Jun 11, 2008 -
Re: Hey
Welcome to the site! I hate coming a few posts late. Everyone else seems to say anything I would have liked to say, and I'm rendered useless. But what can ...
Jun 11, 2008 -
Re: Suicide Kills Us All
I know you wanted it all together! But I'm mean. I have some points to comment on, and I'll just do that here. Voice I know you've read Sparrows , ...
Jun 11, 2008 -
Re: Hey Everyone
Welcome to YWS! What genre do you like to write? I really hope you like YWS! But if you do have any questions or find yourself confused, feel free to ...
Jun 11, 2008 -
Re: Hello Everyone
Hello! Welcome to the YWS! So, Scifi? Who are your favorite authors? (I may not recognize them...heh.) If you have any questions about the site, or need help finding something, ...
Jun 11, 2008 -
Re: The Top 15 Reviewers of June Thus Far
Nate: This is going to be the new reason why I neglect all my other responsibilities. I'd say thank you, but I'm not sure that's the right response. :P
Jun 10, 2008 -
Re: Raisin Hell (1/2)
Oooh my goodness Carl! [/love] that when he spoke waves of flesh rippled about his neck, trapping hapless insects and delinquent teenagers in its folds. This is why I miss ...
Jun 10, 2008 -
Re: Hello
Welcome to YWS! Romance, eh? :lol: Nice! If you have any questions about the site or need help finding your way around, feel free to PM me! How'd you find ...
Jun 10, 2008 -
Re: Diamonds
Hullo darling! I couldn't help but give my love... Diamonds bob playfully on little waves. They wink and twirl, bobbing underwater only to pop back up again. They make a ...
Jun 10, 2008 -
Re: The JM Banning Game
Banned for being too awesome.
Jun 10, 2008 -
Re: Lonely Girl
Hello and Welcome to the Young Writers Society! First I would like to direct you to THE RULES . We have a rule about reviews and poems/stories posted. For everyone ...
Jun 10, 2008
