Emerson

I'm having at you. ^^ Keeping Time Out of curiousity, why no HF? Er, because, this is posted in romantic, but it is set in the past, so. Oh, but ...

Hmmm I wonder if Nate has stats on that. It's really hard to tell, at any time, about how many users we have - discounting gender. People sign up, verify ...

Hello OE! A beautiful thing happened this night— the storm clouds moved in. I find it interesting you chose to say "this night" rather than "to night". I don't think ...

Hello! I closed my eyes, breathing in her scent What does she smell like? the sweet way that her face changed during sleep What does "the sweet way" look like? ...

Penguin's comments about moving words, and it needing more are completely apt. I have some thoughts to add! What I think about this when I first read it is that ...

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oooh neat! I think Sam entered into that contest. I'll certainly surf around your site!

We went to Merrimack Caverns (it was more fun when I was younger). They had one of those funny mirrors:

Aww, but if you followed rules... It's your decision. Bye! *moves to lounge*

Hello there Bat Chick! I made your title lower case, and not all caps. It's annoying for titles to be in all caps - please do not do it. Also, ...

Hello and welcome to the YWS! Here is how you do a review: 1. read someones story or poem 2. give them feed back. Here are a few links on ...

I think he means visually. The best I do is finding people from movies who look like my characters.

Wow, Cynthia. I voted for McCain. I don't really like him, but I don't like Obama either. Lesser of both evils? I guess. I think Obama is a great guy, ...

This didn't make sense. I'll just use the end as an example: He was once a shadow upon my doorstep, He was once a ghost on my trembling frame, But ...

I have to second firearris. Please, don't use all caps, and write your songs in verse like normal people. Rather than using a slash, make an actual line break. It ...