Emerson

Hey there, summersmilesxoxo! Maybe there is something shorter we can call you? Summer? In any case, welcome to the YWS! I see a lot of other people explained things to ...

The rhyme scheme is restraining and annoying. Rhyme schemes are so difficult to do well because they almost always sounds childish and forced. It tends to make people write around ...

If someone wants reviews, they can ask for themselves. :D *locked*

This was the worst movie I've seen in my whole life. Clo, your comment of, "It should have been a parody" couldn't have been more apt. The slow-mo scenes... I ...

I've read Intensity - I think that's what it was. That was very good. I could never finish False Memories because it scared me too much. Not to mention it's ...

Congratulations! Your story sounds really cute. Is it on YWS?

I'm next! ^^ Into The Dark In general look for character development and mood? I wanted it to be effect for emotions, but I'm not sure how it was. Thaaaaank ...

Hello there! I edited your post. Please don't use bad language, kay? Also, you may want to consider using real English. This is a writing site, right? That sounds peculiar ...

Bwah hahah. ^_^

Flem! “You’d think so. [s]So[/s] having been effectively disemboweled, he died right here.” why are there missing limbs?” Change to: why are the limbs missing? If I understood the ending ...

For Sam ------- Collin pulled up the sleeves on his cardigan and hooked his fingers around the top of the fence. He couldn’t believe he was breaking into a cemetery, ...

Is Purple Prose always bad? Is it TABOO? I would say yes. Because Purple Prose is horrible for the reader. It doesn't need to be purple for it to be ...

A term of literary criticism, purple prose is used to describe passages, or sometimes entire literary works, written in prose so overly extravagant, ornate or flowery as to break the ...

I tend not to be able to write late at night. I find more success if I simply shut off my internal, "OMG what is that crap you are writing?" ...

Congratulation! You deserved it, most certainly. I'm proud of you, kid. :)