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Re: Gravestone pt.1
Hey there! Here to deliver you a yummy review. He would just grimace like a child at it would make me laugh. Typo in there! Should be two sentences or ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish [3]
granted, but you are BLIND and cannot use the internets anyway. I wish my armpits weren't so sweaty.
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: The Soft Forge
Hey there you face. I like this. There is so much beautiful imagery crammed full into this thing, it's almost hard to read it once through and catch it all. ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Excuses (Legit)
That spoiler is completely not a spoiler. Ayhew. I was very excited to see you had posted something so of course I had to read it! Vance is significantly not ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: How to plan out my novel?
I've gotten really into organizing my novel based on a three-act set up. I wonder if I can find the site that helped me with this...Yes, I did! Click this ...
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: Help Promote the Literary Journal - Updated with Flyers
I just flooded this on my facebook, and I have lots of reader friends. I'll hop on my twitter and post it too. I think I still have 100+ followers ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Love's Introspection
You know, Kamas, it's hard for me to agree with you. Why? Because I find your alternative interpretation to be AWESOME. I love that what I write inspires two very ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Wilde's Prelude - first sentence
Geat quote snoink! And lumi, you mean contemporary artists. I'm also left thinking about how big of a deal the author is now in publication. You have to have a ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Wilde's Prelude - first sentence
I agree not only because I love Wilde but because I believe he is right. While the author's writing may reveal great truth and honesties aout the author, the work... ...
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: Love's Introspection
I love critical eyes!! Ben: I'm glad I didn't disappoint. Your comment on adding is exactly my feeling when I question the ending. I can't tell if it needs more ...
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: Love's Introspection
I haven't written poetry in a long time, but this came to me last night. I feel like I could have a better ending, so rather than obsessing I thought ...
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: Trust
I completely agree with Isha on backing up what you have to say! I think this was a really good first draft of a poem. Try to condense it though. ...
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: Are you planning on purchasing the Journal?
As soon as it's available for my Nook!
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: Be still my Soul
Hey there! Welcome to YWS. My first impression on this poem, since it's something I'm a bit OCD for, is that the grammar and punctuation are a bit... off. Take ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish [3]
Granted, except hulu is actually retarded. I wish my ears weren't wet on the inside.
Aug 23, 2011
