Emerson

Hello there! Here are some quick tips before I get into the actual critique: -Try not to use -ly adjectives too often, especially when they're not needed at all. "I ...

I have to say the Russian in your title caught my attention. :D Even though I love it, I think you might want to consider using a title that your ...

This is a great start! Aren't pianos lovely? I won't have too much advice because there is one thing I can highlight more than anything else. You love the piano, ...

Hello there! I don't generally review Sci-Fi, so I guess you're lucky! Where it really [s]it really[/s] proved its worth was in the radiation zones they were deployed [s]was out[/s] ...

This may not apply to TLG, but if anybody hasn't read Strunk and White (The Elements of Style), it's high time you did. It's a classic for a reason. So ...

This is interesting but also incredebly strange. I'll begin the critique. ^_^ I just keep staring at the [s]booking[/s] book in my hands, Is this what you meant? In the ...

I've always loved Writing Fiction but you're probably not in need of that. It's more of a beginner's guide, though still helpful. The Artful Edit was also great, and as ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! First off if you've not read the rules, here is a link to them: the rules! I edited your post because you had a bad ...

Hey there! Even though you put this in "other" I'm going to review it a bit like a poem because it seems to fit that area most. :) This is ...

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There's an inexpensive laptop called the AlphaSmart. AlphaSmarts aren't exactly laptops though, and I'm sure if she's looking for a laptop she's looking for an actual computer, not just one ...

My novel is set in England 1930, but they're not too far off. I may, however, be covering a completely different social structure than you. Perhaps if you have some ...

Welcome! heehee, nope, for the most part we are far from high school students writing love poems - well. For the most part. ^_~ They're not bad love poems! One ...

Hi there Carolinewashere! [s]As if t[/s] T ossed in bed, we cling to each other. Be more assertive! No, "as if"s, make a statement! :) It helps. Being nonspecific in ...

I read this along with 1984 and Brave New World for my Brit Lit class over the summer. I thought it was amazing, and it was my favorite book out ...