Emerson

Hullo! 12 months earlier... I think you can cut this, it will flow just fine without it! We'll get the idea. However, she always knew how to make me feel ...

Holy Father Frost, that is a big icicle... I do hope they didn't fall off or something. You should really melt them off. Those can kill. @_@ I can only ...

Hey there! and the voice not in the[?] right tone This is a very dark and morbid poem, I have to say. At least, the ending is. I'm not sure ...

I placed them where I did as poetic devices. I wanted the poem to have a kind of pensive aura about it. I'm not sure where you get the idea ...

Hullo there! First off, lay off the ellipses! Those are the .... things in case you don't know. Despite what you might think, they don't add to your poem at ...

Hello! First before I review - and this really has nothing to do with anything - I adore your avatar. The air [s]is[/s] in the room is suffocating. Warm as ...

will you go [s]threw[/s] everything with me through I have to say, this is more of a grocery list of what you want from someone than an actual poem. Why ...

Hello there! Now, a few words that I have a prologues... I'm not big on them? And I'll explain why. They're sort of useless, if you think about it. What ...

I think if you're wanting to introduce a list of reasons for being loved, this fits nicely. Now I think it’s time the good was returned to you. [s]So[/s] I ...

Hello there Beemarie! First of all, please don't "bump" your own posts! What this means, is don't post saying, "Will someone say something!" Be patient, reviews will come. Or you ...

10/10 I love mean penguins. ^^

I think everyone's chosen time for writing, length-wise, won't be the same. One thing I can say is that you need to spend as much time as possible on it ...

I'm [finally] in today! Shouldn't be that bad, 6 a day? Since I'm starting on 20 Dec I'll end on 3 Jan. That should be more than enough time, right? ...

Hello there! Is there any way you could get rid of the giant gaps between each line? It makes reading strange. I think this is a really beautiful idea, but ...

Hello Death Cab! I have to say I love your username. :) A lot of people get worried about YWS and copyright, but I promise you are good. Here is ...