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Re: Kindles or books?
Oh I love this argument. I own a Nook Simple Reader. I previously owned a Nook 1st Edition, which my fiance now uses. I absolutely love my Nook. Why? Because ...
Feb 25, 2012 -
Re: How can I make my work better through reviews?
I 150% agree with Rosey saying to review other people's work. I did that more than writing, but whenever I did write it helped me break away from my own ...
Feb 25, 2012 -
Re: A Journey Through the Binary
Bek: Thank you so much. I like your two line changes, and they're not big enough that I should argue about them. I actually like the house/home thing, because those ...
Sep 7, 2011 -
Re: Resplendent Night
I really like the diction in this poem. You have some beautiful lines, beautiful imagery. I particularly liked the odder things you said. Tumble like washing machines... random things thrown ...
Sep 7, 2011 -
Re: A Journey Through the Binary
16+ for the F word. This is a personal poem for me, but I hope others enjoy it as well. I keep changing the title while talking to people about ...
Sep 7, 2011 -
Re: Calypso
I think the biggest bump this poem has is I have to know what calypso is all about in order to really understand the poem... So from there, I Can ...
Sep 7, 2011 -
Re: I Wanted to Change My Name
This poem has such a good feel to it. I love the way it's casually written. That's something I think many people wonder about, fight with, and come to accept... ...
Sep 7, 2011 -
Re: Immortal
Hey there! My perennial silhouette blackens my dark cold heart, cools my icy flesh, steals all my warmth, my grace it takes, So I chose this verse here because I ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Eyes.
ooo lesbians. I love lesbians! I think this is a pretty good story for a starter. It could have some dusting up here and there. During the fight between the ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Falling Stars
Howdy hi This is a very short piece. It's a nice memory, but I'm not sure it's a story. It's lacking a lot of stuff that is real essential to ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Never Ever
This is adorable. Not too much to say on it though, really. I think it might be more fanfiction that actual fiction, since the Peter Pan stories aren't your own... ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Headlights
This was quite a joy to read. While I'm a bit, ah, pretentious maybe, I still enjoyed it. I tend to feel fussy when I read something that doesn't have ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Everytime he smiles
This is an adorable little story. :) Grats on it being your first post! I think this could use some beefing up, though. It needs meat! While you have a ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Age is but a number
oh jeez... that's a great ending. :P This is a pretty little funny thing. I think you could certainly expand it into more than it is. Right now the writing ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Gravestone pt.2
Hi again! Back like I promised. It is so hard to remember that he isn’t right next to him me . glanced outside at the snowflakes falling like rocks. I ...
Aug 28, 2011
