Emerson

I really like any kind of candy from Europe. What's your favorite time of the day?

I changed the rating to PG. I don't really like this because it is just a list of things, some statements put together. Also, though I love alliterations, sometimes it ...

I think this is a great draft for a poem, certainly could use some cleaning up, but couldn't all things? ^^ I agree, the third line should probably be omitted. ...

Snoink: Shouldn't our red stars look that amazing?

Oh! I adore the theme of this poem. It's really great. I only have a few comments regarding it. :) First off, I think some of your stanzas are just ...

Hello, hello! Who knew so famous a show , with so expensive a little merchandise, would be so hard to find? Do you mean movie, or book? In your second ...

I have to say, honestly, that I don't understand this at all. Alright, that isn't entirely true. I understand the theme, I believe at least. The darkness in ourselves? well, ...

Well, since Kiss covered a lot of the mechanics and so forth of the poem, I guess I'll take what I can get! I agree that your first two lines ...

Hello Emmy! Ready and waiting to save you I have to say I really thought the ending would tie in to dancing! And when it didn't, I was a little ...

11/10 because House is that amazing.

Hello Angel! First of all, I have to say that adding polls to your writing is kind of annoying, although I can see why you did. ^_~ Next time, though, ...

the crystal clear rain I could do without "crystal clear" because really, rain isn't. "Aj!" He yelled smiling when he saw her window slowly opening from the second story. Aj ...

Good evening dear poet! ^^ Like a sunken ship The sides all sunken in Like lilchoma, I don't like the repetition of sunken. I'm not sure how you can fix ...

Creating Characters - it's the best part because I love having people in my mind! ^^ Not to mention you get to explore so many things, and they become so ...

I edited your post to fix the italics because I love you that much . The new formats of stories makes it so that you have to do a new ...