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Re: Are you for me?
Hello there :-D Romance isn't my thing but I think I can do sentence fixer uppers as armonia called them. A man wearing a dark grey suit stood at the ...
Sep 25, 2006 -
Re: Character Development
Is there anywhere I could find it that its not in PDF format?
Sep 25, 2006 -
Re: Starting and Ending
You should probably plot out what you're going to do, If you're having this much trouble. Make an outline, and define what each chapter is about. Really, it doesn't matter ...
Sep 25, 2006 -
Re: Countdown to 1500 Members!
I made cookies today (crunchy butterscotch!) I can bring those.
Sep 25, 2006 -
Re: Countdown to 1500 Members!
Where are all these members coming in so fast from? Are we going to be able to tell who the 1500th member is? I truly think we should throw a ...
Sep 24, 2006 -
Re: Beggining of Till Death's Acceptance
I've decided not to work on grammar and typos, I think Myth has covered the majority. To begin, I don't like the first paragraph much. Its a lot of telling, ...
Sep 24, 2006 -
Re: Beneath You
That is what is is. That is what it is, maybe? I liked it, the wording was nice and the lines the perfect length. I'm not good at critiquing lyrics ...
Sep 24, 2006 -
Re: Lolita
It seems I beat you, Cassandra :-) I have my very poor synopsis above. I'll try to find another, better one out there on the web... Taken from the description ...
Sep 24, 2006 -
Re: It's the welcome wagon!
I'm one who believes in the rule "Critique, and you shall be critiqued" :-D
Sep 24, 2006 -
Re: Lolita
Very Generally speaking? It's about a man named Humbert Humbert who loves Nymphets (Girls that are of the age 9 to 14, if I remember correctly) I know it sounds ...
Sep 24, 2006 -
Re: Lolita
I haven't seen any of the movies no, but I'd really like to. What I think is impressive is the fact that Nabokov's first language was Russian. He mastered the ...
Sep 24, 2006 -
Re: How did you find the Young Writers Society?
YWS was listed in an article with the 100 best sites for writers in Writers Digest Magazine. It was an issue from just a few months ago, did you know ...
Sep 24, 2006 -
Re: I AM NEW AND THE SOON TO BE GREATEST MEMBER HERE!
Hey Slick, don't be too vain :-) We're all the greatest members ever. but anyhow, welcome! Hope you have fun!
Sep 24, 2006 -
Re: The Death Parlor
And, oh! Was it a nice place! IMO it should be 'And, oh [comma] was it a nice place!' it just seems funny to start the sentence with was. or ...
Sep 24, 2006 -
Re: The Queen of Dolls
I liked how morbid and disturbing this was, amazing job. Things like this entertain the hell out of me. Ever since I read Lolita its a source of interest :-D ...
Sep 23, 2006
