Emerson

Well, who says voice (at least in the begining development of it) can't be edited in later? I guess the way I explain it does make it sound like an ...

I just finished The Importance of Being Earnest by Oscar Wilde today. I love Wilde..He's so...amazing. I'm starting on Death of a Salesmen by I Don't know. It's another play. ...

I like going to the library because if I choose a book I end up not enjoying, its not that big of a deal. But if I had bought it, ...

Daina had been sleeping, or more accurately trying too. The first comma should really be after 'or' and you need a comma after 'accurately' I believe those are called appositives. ...

‘We don’t like to admit it, but we are trapped by it[comma]’ he thought, glancing over at it, as it seemed to creep forward, furthering its attempts to overwhelm everything ...

I'm an honors student, so I know your pain! I'm in honors Chem 1, so I know how confusing that is and my teachers crazy. I practically beg my parents ...

Understanding and Finding Voice Voice in a story is something that makes your writing unique, but most people either don’t have one, don’t know how to make one, or do ...

Il tres beau. Elle sont artiste! Tres Bien! minus the accents. lol.

Nice tip! Although I've never had problems with this. At least lately I don't I put my beauty in the voice, and the words I choose but balance it with ...

Hah, a good googling cleared all of this up... use this

but you could get salmonella! *shock!* Actually, they have this product that some organizations sell at my school as a fundraiser, its like egg-less cookie dough or something like that, ...

Thanks you two :-) I'm rather impressed by your critique Cassandra! I love my work being riped to pieces and told "GET BETTER!" It's my favorite! I feel like I'm ...

@_@ well I really don't need it to last a month! I made a huge batch (36 cookies by golly!) and couldn't finish baking them all. It was kind of ...

If, say, I were to make cookies but not bake them, wrap the dough up and refrigerate it, how long until its unusable? Wouldn't the eggs, at some point, create ...

So as you can see, I've already gotten a lot of edits on it (see posts below!) but, I haven't the time to edit with school and NaNoWriMo coming so ...