Emerson

The first paragraph (the one with the italicized words) wasn't exactly 'great.' it was hard to read through, since the bulk of it was prose and strange adjectives. but I ...

I think I was about ten, and I got a bike for Christmas and was inspired. I wrote about a magical bike that was a time traveling device.

Welcome to the site :-) I critiqued your first post, actually! Very nice work, for a 13 year old! I'm surprised your so young, the writing wasn't that bad (I ...

Nice disclaimer :-) You don't really need it, no one will steal... The moon was full and the color of the autumn Remove 'the' before 'autumn' The wind stirred the ...

I don't really like the first line (all of it) It just sounds strange. And so does much of the rest of it. All the periods make everything jump out ...

yay! Hurrah hurrah hurrah! I like the skins, except they sometimes make viewing certain areas of the threads hard, so I just stick to the normal ones. And who is ...

I was only trying to critique, and thus improve, sureal's writing. You don't have to take a stab at me for that. Critiques are all up to opinion. And, either ...

That would be an interesting guideline. I've actually seen a lot of people chatting while under the influence.

yeah, nevermind. I lied. Nate deleted some people sooooooooo its no more. There is said whisky.

The web site seems more like an ad campaign for....goodness knows what more than anything. If people aren't on the forum, go critique! Or read. That's what I do.

Awww... I made a thread and everything. Pooh. Nate, delete my thread, would you? Now I know not to make spur of the moment threads like that again. I get ...

The ad in your sig sounded interesting... She had been kind of enjoying the strange experience of watching the people [comma] The angels. I know its a child's voice but ...

Since no one else is really on right now, and I'm bored, I'm taking the liberty of making this party for the member who won :-D its BrEe. Told you ...

Slick jimmy seems to be causing up roars everywhere. Little kids are so smart. I don't think I figured out computers until I was 8-ish or 10-ish. But, then again, ...

And where is said 1500th?