Emerson

I liked it, though they don't have house shows like these in America so I had to sort of guess what it all was. I liked that it was a ...

Well, since all Jim can say is, "wordy," I'll help you out a bit more. Yes, it is wordy. But what you have to do is pull back on the ...

Hi there :-D Welcome to the forum! I hope you enjoy it here.

I stood on the brinks of forever This part here, though fancy and creative, should be changed I think. "Forever" is too abstract, especially how you are using it. I ...

I emailed Anne Rice because I wanted to ask her what advice she had for a growing writer. I saved the email. She just said keep trying and believing in ...

Well, I just got bumped up to instructor. My colors aren't working yet though. So, since posting in squills (I'm still not 100% sure what these are) is part of ...

Claudette - It does that to me too. Well then what the heck is the problem!? Now I'm frustraited... I've given up with the buttons and just write the code ...

This might not be a bug, but when I'm using the "Post a Reply" to post (rather than the quick response) If my text has gotten so long that I ...

Going along with the 'view last 100 posts' comment (I've never been to TSR) and adding another thought of my own, on the other forums I've been too (For example, ...

The girl shuddered in her tight Levi jeans as she waited for the cross light to turn green or for the cars to stop coming. I think 'coming' is the ...

well of course its repetitive because its a song, but I still think it does way too much of it. Maybe with music, it wouldn't be so noticeable?

On some other forums I've been to they have things that show you if the member is online or not, that goes along with their post info like screen name, ...

If you make spaces between your paragraphs, things are easier to read—just A tip :-) Her naked shoulders showed the join between her back and her wings : tiny white ...

It seems everyone has gone over this a good number of times for grammar and what not. Since its a beginning, my only comment is that you make it more ...

I liked it, though it felt rough in places because sometimes you rhymed, and sometimes you didn't. It was a lot of repeating, which got on my nerves a little ...