Emerson

Le Petit Prince - Saint Exupery Extremely Loud & Incredibly Close - Jonathan Safran Foer Frankenstein - Mary Shelley Dracula - Bram Stoker As I lay Dying - William Faulkner ...

Hullo! I changed your title to make it more appropriate. Please refrain from using naughty words in thread titles, even for your lyrics, poems, stories etc. Thank you!

Ooooh I really adore this, a lot. I sort of skimmed the above and saw that Castle was talking about abstractions. I actually don't mind the abstractions of love and ...

My suggestion: don't write a prologue at all. If you're writing a scene that is way before your actual narrative, right in the middle, or at the end, consider whether ...

Hello BeckFletch! First off I would like to say that I love you're writing historical fiction, and I also love your last line, about "the rap on the door". Great ...

I'm kind of thinking this is a suicide poem, but then I'm not sure what the golden pot is. Strings, or in this case, silver cords, are often a metaphor ...

I love it to death. :) It's really beautiful, especially the ending. You have some great imagery in it; I adore the shadow part. I like how the lines are ...

Hello Peace! Within himself, Beyond those cold indifferent eyes, Somewhere along the bitterness, Beneath his soothing lies. I like how you keep this from being melodramatic, but I don't like ...

Hey there! I'm going to cover a few topics, so to make it easier I'll make the topics bold. It might look like a lot but I'll try to make ...

I really like the idea behind this poem! It's good to finally have an unperfect person, instead of a perfect Mary Sue kind of man. Though the idea is great, ...

Well this was certainly interesting! I like your writing, but to be honest it was struggling to keep my attention. Since there was no real defined conflict after the girl ...

Hello there! Your first paragraph is broken up mid sentence, did you know that? It also has an awful lot of sentences that start with "he". Honestly, it's not that ...

Hello Panda! Welcome to the young writers society! If you have any questions about the site or need help finding something, feel free to message me. Also, on a larger ...

Hullo hullo! I'm not sure where you get the idea that this is so bad. :) I loved it - to pieces. Your imagery and descriptions were wonderful. I hardly ...

Hello and welcome to the site! You're an editor in your spare time? I already like you. A lot. Not to mention you have a wonderful avatar. And I can ...