Emerson

I have ocean currents, weather patterns, races and everything. ...Ocean currents? Weather patterns?....what are you writing!? I'm not putting that much into my first draft, I'm leaving out all the ...

Thanks for the clearing-up :-D

Fand gave me the title 'thicker than water' and from there I got 'the blood is thicker' but I had somehow managed to not notice Jack's post at all! I ...

It was a soft white at the edges, a bright orange in the center, and as it came up, slumping over the horizon, it sang to me. It pressed to ...

Injuries? I'm not sure, I haven't had any in quite some time, being a vampire really pumps up my immunity. but there was that time I was pushed out of ...

I've heard that 'until' is the proper word but in older classic books (EX: Crime and Punishment by Dostoevsky) the word till (or do they spell it til?) is used. ...

I was trying to beat your point count very badly, but I was a good 2,000 or so off. It was so depressing! But I'm glad you won :-D I ...

I said stubbornly. dialogue tags are just annoying. remove 'stubbornly' we should know from her words how something was said, let your reader make the story up for themselves. It's ...

I think imp covered a good measure of things. I liked it, it was cute to read. try using a word other than 'blue' I'd suggest (I think there is ...

well you have the time limit within Nanowrimo. I really think nanofimo is just an exstention date...lol

writing should have a spectrum of emotions, like a color chart. Make it a rainbow! lol. Bravo snoink.

prosithion: the plot is above, I believe... the third post.

It was there, sure and solid. She resisted the urge to bring it out and open it; that would be foolishness supreme. I don't like the word supreme here. it ...

A frigid wind blew viciously around Tyson, making his jet-black hair dance to its own rhythm. I don't like -ly verbs much or any adjectives really. maybe try to find ...

MLA= Masters in Language Arts I believe. I'm going to have a good three or four professions probably, I'm too unsatisfied of a person.