Emerson

I just outline the events, sometimes in greater detail and some in almost no detail. I have no idea what the word count will be. I'm scared about the ending, ...

lol Everyone hates Dickens! I've started him, but decided to read other things. It makes me feel bad though, last night Sam said my style was Dickens-like. oh well. Oh, ...

I don't like Something Wicked This Way Comes by Ray Bradbury. I have a particular dislike for Stephen King. He is too slow. He starts slow and the scenes are ...

That was a great read, snoink! You just pull this stuff out of no where, huh? I'm glad us Critiquers aren't god, I've gone around telling people one way on ...

well, you'll want to avoid "see you later"s any how, using things like that clutters up events. You have to keep in mind while writing that everything (every line of ...

Now I've only read the first part, but I have some to say. books with teen angst don't work well....not at all. its not that they are bad, its that ...

Chapter 3: (Hopefully more to go into the master copy!) With Tannar, at least she could have commiserated, albeit silently, about the tediousness, but the Vocilias listened with rapt faces ...

Chapter 2: Chancellor George Etteridge sat alone in his office, with a glass of brandy in front of him and hating the every single minute that passed without the phone ...

Having faster that light speed , it took the Akbar, Artemis’s ship, two weeks to reach the planet that the weak signal was coming from. Something about that seems weird. ...

Go Cassie! I love your story... I'm really looking forward to reading it, so you better finish it! I need to work on my ending. I'm nervous. I have nothing!

He touched his breastbone, running his fingers over the spider tattoo that marked it. The picture was a sign to everyone in Naryen-Mair. Stay away—this creature is defiled! A few ...

Chapter 2: Karenna smiled rather more warmly as the twins came and clustered around her like kittens around a mother cat. 'rather more warmly' doesn't really work. if you're going ...

This is just weird.... ---- He had ordered Chinese food for the night, but forgot I didn’t like rice. I didn’t blame him, its hard to understand. I don’t mind ...

You should PM Nate or Jack , they would be able to help you I bet.

The air is cold to , and if it wasn’t for my warm hoody I’d probably be inside like the rest of them. too and all I really want it ...