Emerson

7/10 nice, but because its all blue its somewhat boring.

If you don't know where to start, outline your plot and maybe then you can find the BEST place to start from. If you still can't find a starting place, ...

for your enjoyment of laughing at our errors and stupidities!

It was rather difficult to understand in places. Try making paragraphs, adding story elements (characters/emotions/scenes/settings/real dialog etc) use commas, periods, and capitalization when needed.

Thats so interesting! We haven't traced my family back that far, but that would be rather exciting. I'd love to see the photographs!

I knew she would run to me soon, but I heard no patter of feet up the escaliers. Rather than speak English, I spoke French. I'm not even sure if ...

Yeah. I want to get to like....60 or 70, depending on how much more my story actually needs. I just need to finish the story! Thats it! but now I ...

Go Cass! I've only upped by 1k. I understand why writing after 50k is so hard. 'why am I doing this again? Oh yeah, the story isn't over...'

The story in general was interesting. Though it lacked a lot of story elements. Dialog, action, scenes, what ever else a story needs. (It's really late at night, forgive me.) ...

So you're going on a Nabokov craze? Nice. I wish I was.

Begins with a Q, if I remember correctly? If I remember correctly, didn't Hum name Quillty after an uncle of his? Because the man looked like his Uncle? I remember ...

My lack of squills posts is getting me to write this. It says we are supposed to write 1 for every two weeks but, I don’t see anyone else writing ...

never use floppies! *dies* if you're going to do that, use a jump/thumb drive or a (my mp3 player, a creative zen micro photo has this) removable hard drive. Those ...

thank you :-) I know people are probably talking behind my back about my lack of ANY edit, but hey I'm a busy (and procrastinating) person. EVENTUALLY, this will be ...

I'll post mine. MAYBE, after the rewrite I have planned. It's so messy...