Emerson

See I would have gone for feminine and ammunition... it seems like that to me, ha. Silly, silly. Welcome to YWS! If you have any questions or need help finding ...

Wow, I'm in a club. And I'm 200 or so away from the most exclusive club. ^^ I'll make it soon!

Welcome to the YWS! I'm also a Mod. ^^ Aren't you lucky, two mod reviews and one from kissthewtich! She is a fine poetry reviewee. I honestly only have two ...

As the above, I enjoyed this. ^^ I'm not incredebly fond of the repetition of "touch me on my thigh" probably because the word thigh is just so strange, and ...

Hi there! He was coming. He was coming. I think saying this once would suffice. Also is there any way you could write this without the verb "to be"? Maybe ...

Hi there! I have to say this was a particularly interesting read. The narrator really caught me. At first I didn't felt so interested, but for some reason the voice ...

I like this because it starts out as a cheery poem that might be all love and brightness, but it's actually incredebly dark. Some of the writing is moderate, but ...

Hey there! 'tell me,' she whispers 'what you see.' and casts her empty eyes The last line of this stanza bugs me because it seems grammatically weird so it throws ...

Hey there! This was certainly my favorite stanza: When God's hand repaints the sky, And the day's replaced by night, We'll tell them the world's beautiful, And it's such a ...

I like this a lot, but reading over it a few more times, I'm not certain I understand it. Haha, this is frustraiting for me because I want to hope ...

Hey there Jare Bear! I have to agree with Nate; this comes off more as a story than a poem. You don't exactly use any poetical devices apart from line ...

Hey there! I adore the imagery you have in this poetry. It is so beautiful and spot on. My problem with this poem, however, is that I don't know what ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS also. :) I didn't realize you were knew when I reviewed your last poem. If you have any questions regarding the site or need help ...

Hi there! Oy, sonnets are so difficult! So I commend you even for trying. Though, really, without the iambic pentameter it isn't a sonnet, but you already knew that. ^_~ ...

For fiction, I love all of the above. I especially like when they find the bigger things I've screwed up on or could improve on, or don't use at all, ...