Emerson

I feel by body betraying me I think there's a typo here... I really liked it! It could become something nice. The only thing I didn't like was that we ...

Yes, several in fact. I even took part in one, though it was an accident. -Diedrick Are you human? (This could be figuratively :-))

I loved this book, and could not put it down! It was pretty good, though at first the '70's slang through me off (I didn't know it was from the ...

I think there is another thread about this book somewhere. (You should probably look for that one, a double is kind of superfluous) I posted there ;-)

Yes. At one point I made it an effort to have Sasha practically fall in love with me. She wanted me to not hate her so much, so I had ...

Hey there and welcome to the forum ;-) I'm sure there is nothing new I could say that anyone else hasn't already said. I hope you enjoy your time here. ...

Hey there! Welcome to the forum! And that is ANOTHER for Stl! We have so many people around here XD We need a writers group.

YOU ARE NOT PERFECT. Why do you have to pee in my Cheerios? I liked the thought of being perfect... You're good at these tip things, Snoink ;-) You should ...

I don't talk to people much. As a result, they don't know my name. But, rather than jumping around, if I had to answer such a question, I would not ...

Her friends that were once there, has gone to a new place. This sentence starts out plural and ends singular. It should be "Have gone to a new place" or ...

-I care about this novel like it was my baby. Even though I hate it and want to kill it/edit it! I'm attached to it, because its so long. -I ...

and passed the rest of it to me through the cell bars. Going on from what I said to the last part, THERE ARE CELL BARS?! I'm going to leave ...

Her voice was calm, even. I was surprised to find something I didn't like so soon :-) the way you have even just hanging there sort of made me feel ...

The first paragraph is ok. You start out nicely but then I got lost because it started getting confusing. You never mentioned a music shop, and when you are talking ...

look, its a TIGAAR! you draw better than I ever could (I draw ugly stick people even) so I honor you for that. Will it get colored?