Emerson

I have never done this. But it feels to weird for me, the only way I can know how my characters would react with the events in the book, is ...

You could just switch POVs during the story. Ya know? This is too simple of an answer for it to be coming from me....hah.

NICKI JAINE!!!! *foams at mouth* If you can prevent something, there is no need to cure it, so yes. - Lev ....que? - Fleur do you share, or are you ...

ah, rose is a beaut. And, Emotion less, if you want to get real into it, it would actually l'emo. French smash vowels occasionally :-) (Example: l'oragne, which is a ...

I liked those plastic hammers, but real hammers are just as nice. - Lev Dolls, little dolls. The cloth ones. Or the glass ones, which broke too often because you ...

ah, one quick note, there is a convenient 'edit' button up in the top right hand corner of your posts, its better to 'edit' them, rather than to repost (unless ...

I like to keep them away from my tub. - Lev They are cute, and I wish Lev would by me more, but he abhors cute things, other than me ...

I'm going to not answer the question, but assume that there should be an 'as' before the word 'thoughts'. - Lev (I'm not sure I like the name lev...) Yes, ...

Bonjour, I'm here :-) Nothing could have stopped me that afternoon, nothing could slow my legs, running using energy reserves from months of kit kats and mellow puffs or calm ...

I speak to Fleur, but She doesn't often speak back. And we are never too in-depth, why should we talk? We fight, of course we do. And we talk. But ...

I have no siblings, though I do get along horrible with my wife's brother. — Still unnamed, I think I'll look for a K or an L name... what is ...

I remember saying, "It wasn't me," over and over and over again until the words slurred together and came out more like "ihwa-sent-meh" — unnamed character as of yet. do ...

But Camus is translated, you know. You'll have to be critiquing the translator. Yeah, i realized a few minutes later that Camus is French, and felt somewhat stupid (I realized ...

Capitalize your I's. That is your first mistake. In your first stanza, the last line is cute, but you could have made it cuter. Try to do more than tell ...

This is such a problem for me, and others I am sure. I was urged by a horrible sentence to make this thread. "But Rieux was gazing frowningly at the ...