Emerson

Hey there! Welcome to the Young Writers Society! If you have any questions about the site, feel free to message me. I suggest you take a look at The Rules ...

Guessing by the repetitions of this poem I'm thinking that you mistook Lyric Poetry for Lyrics. Would you like me to move this to lyrics? Since this is in the ...

Two quick comments: 1. Capitalize the pronoun I. 2. Punctuate properly - it makes reading the poem easier. Other than that the major problem of this poem is that I ...

Helllo and welcome to the YWS! If you have any questions about the site or need help finding something feel free to message me. I thought this stanza was the ...

Layleun: I looove your outfit! Do you normally dress up or was it an occasion?

Hello and welcome! Firestarter said we're like nanowrimo all year round. He's basically right, except here we have less experts of incredebly crazy and random things, and a lot more ...

Hello and welcome to the YWS! If you have any questions or need help finding something, feel free to message me. You sound like you're going to be a wonderful ...

You should sell it. :P

Hello Cade! I know our poetry styles clash, so this review might simply be a cranky style rant from me, but I'll give it anyway because it might be of ...

Hello Via! *snuggles* And happy birthday! against lighted rooms of windows This line bothered me more than anything. It throws me off. Saying that the rooms are lit just doesn't ...

My biggest complaint would be the utter lack of punctuation. Some poetry can survive without, but I think this would do much better with. The above reviewer said feathers can't ...

I would say you don't have to worry about it until you get towards the publishing process. Until then, go for it. :D

the amoung of Purps participating was greating Say what? :P

I didn't pick a side, I just got placed somewhere. ^^ Thank you Jiggipoo! Additionally, as to the word awesome, you're both using it wrong . (That video link, by ...

Hullo! I concur with Connie. Up until your last stanza, I was thinking, "Wow, the rhyme scheme flows so nicely!" Then I was attacked by the awkward afar/war rhyme. It's ...