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Re: An Unknown Shadow
Can I sum up what I just read: Oh no, your scared! but you are only scared of yourself, and you are a shadow that you don't know. Or something. ...
Dec 22, 2006 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish
(Strangely enough, right now i really do have a dreadful headache. It's too painful to move.... Fand, I hate you. :-p) Granted, you have no friends. I wish for something ...
Dec 22, 2006 -
Re: Character Answer Game
I do not care, I'd rather not have presents anyway. Why should someone else buy me something that I already have the money to buy myself? - Lev Wrapped! It ...
Dec 22, 2006 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish
Granted, and you are given the idea for a story! But, it goes just like every other story heard, and in fact, is composed of only cliches and very bad ...
Dec 22, 2006 -
Re: consolation
I think the addition of one word could do the trick: (added word in bold) sorrow is something you learn to live with. Just like your fingers, your teeth your ...
Dec 22, 2006 -
Re: consolation
I rather liked it, I suppose because of the implied idea. I think it would work better punctuated. sorrow is something you learn to live with; like your fingers, your ...
Dec 22, 2006 -
Re: Sade's Folly
Thanks! And, You are right, it reads better the way you gave it, but that is seven syllables, and It needs to be eight. Maybe I'll take a look at ...
Dec 22, 2006 -
Re: Character Answer Game
Oh, goodness, no! I am my own writer. Although...From whence did I come? - Lev Writer? What are you talking about? I'm a real person! - Fleur Have you ever ...
Dec 22, 2006 -
Re: The Prologue
Of course, like usual, I'm somewhat confused and have a question. I'm trying to figure out how to create the beginning for my story. Case 1: Authors Notes IC: If ...
Dec 22, 2006 -
Re: romance
I'll admit, I haven't read much of the above posted. Though, I did read your general story idea. I really only have one thing to say, your main one-sentence plot ...
Dec 22, 2006 -
Re: Too Darn Hot
ah, I felt like reading this little advice 'cause my new story is looming on romance, though not very strongly... Maltese Falcon is an amazing movie (I love Bogart!) and ...
Dec 22, 2006 -
Re: Character Answer Game
I've always been a very convincing person, I can get anyone to believe anything no matter how big of a lie it is. It that a mind trick? - Lev ...
Dec 22, 2006 -
Re: Sade's Folly
Thanks everyone! I don't think I ever said that. I edited what Bubs mentioned (I'm going to call you bubs from now on). And I noticed the I thing RR ...
Dec 22, 2006 -
Re: Character Answer Game
I have stolen an unbelievable amount of women's hearts. Not to say I wanted the majority of them, in fact more often then not I tossed them back. - Lev ...
Dec 22, 2006 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish
Granted. You haven't any eyes. I wish my legs weren't hurting right now, BUT that I didn't loose them all together
Dec 22, 2006
