Emerson

Okay, so I'm a couple days early. But I have gifts!!! NOTE: You need flash, and I'm not sure what loading time is like on dial up... Gift one! Gift ...

Snoink? That sounds like something that would happen to you... I'd love to be better explained to about the grammar part... heh.

I am not sure I understand what you mean. - Lev I try so hard not to have "power over" anyone, its much easier to just be nice, you must ...

I'm not completely sure what to take away from this reading... XD Let's say you have a fairly boring couplet like this: She left a coffee stain on my tabled ...

Sureal, you crack me up. "I'm getting tired of these fantasy stories, so my characters (The ones you will soon meet after I have explained their genealogy, home towns, likes, ...

good but could be turned into something better. In some cases you need more punctuation. Can you see me [?] I hide behind a layer of pain and untruths, I ...

If someone disagrees with a point another has made, they should say so. It's much better for the author to get two sides of a story. I could see how ...

I liked the idea of the poem. But it could be cut down to so little. A lot of the lines you use to describe are rather superfluous. moons pull ...

I never go to the movies. They don't seem to offer any kind of entertainment. - Lev We were to poor to go the cinema. - Fleur (also answering for ...

Granted. Horse poop picker-uper. I wish this story didn't suck

Granted. How would a plump, fit, blond-hair blue-eyed corpse suit your teenage lustful needs? I wish that the horrible head ache Fand gave me, and has yet to take away, ...

Saw - Lev rose petal - Fleur car tire - Felicion do you have siblings, and what do you think of them?

Are we not allowed to write in Russianesque? You know I've always had a thing for those Russian authors, especially Nabokov, I would have to say his style/voice is influencing ...

I like the radio, its so old time. - Lev. What is a teevee? - Fleur do you read a lot?

granted, and you eat so much you pop and die :-p I wish I knew how to begin my story.