Emerson

For some time, though I've never counted -Lev I could go but.. I prefer to eat. - Fleur Do you believe in heaven and hell? Or do you believe in ...

I thought it was about time I talk about myself. Because who DOESN'T want to know more about me? ;-) As you all must already know, I enjoy writing. I've ...

Yes, A sketch before I paint, and I am an artist. I like painting women, they are the best models. Nature, also, is a good model. - Lev Are you ...

Now that I've gripped myself around it all, that was lovely :-) Very helpful, you didn't write about planning characters like most do, but about how to use characters within ...

The purple in the first one is...very beautiful, its a nice capture of nature :-D It's impressive you got those bugs to be so still, ha ha ha. And, the ...

I haven't read the whole article yet :-) but from what I've seen its good. Inertia, I'd be willing to buy the hand! And as he also said, there are ...

Oh, that was a good read :-) The story, and the moral, and the rhyming, all that niceness. The only thing that could be improved on is rhythm, which will ...

I'm here to repay a critique! You are missing commas in some places...only twice, once in the first paragraph and then once in the second. Yep, that’s right. Been one ...

The above critiques have been taken into consideration and I've just changed it to the edited version :-) I upped the rating to PG-13 which may not be needed now, ...

All critiques welcomed! Though, WARNING : Since this is my first draft, I'm taking a bit of a NaNoWriMo mind set to it. So, all critiques are welcomed, but keep ...

No one seems....happy. Wow, I spoiled the cheer, didn't I? *giggles*

The pictures from Poland of Aushcwitz-Birkenau are my favorite... so chilling. The ferris wheel, I like that one also, it is at a great angle.

I am annoyed by people who like to disagree with someone, when they already fully know that that someone knows more about the subject than they do. I also cannot ...

Hello there Aero! Ralph crawled up behind him, groping through the morass in in jury. I'm going to be incredibly picky, the two "in" sounds one after another bothers me ...

Long, beautiful legs close enough for me to squeeze with a lover's grip. - Lev Shoelaces! - Fleur A businesswomen - Felicion. Word Association: carnal