Emerson

I should say, they're beautiful icons. I can tell where some are from, and then there are some (Rows four and five) that I haven't a clue about. I like ...

I, like most scoundrelly men, notice legs more than anything. And if not the legs, the ass right above them. - Lev I like to look at peoples hands, they ...

Moments later I begin to scream bloody murder again and again. screaming "bloody murder" is a cliched description. You could just say she began to scream (and you wouldn't even ...

I read them. I remember liking them. But I don't remember much about them... I stopped in the third one I think? I'm not completely sure. And, you read the ...

Ha ha ha ha! I would name it, "Get drunk here!" That would be a fun thing to own. - Lev Oh, Le Cafe de Fleur! How boring of me? ...

I'm not sure this would really help me with anything... my stories are so different, the characters wouldn't be able to interact. I have that problem... My characters don't live ...

She was gone, but nothing changed. I actually like doing this a lot. hee hee.

hah! Oscar Wilde... He's very swoon worthy, isn't he? He looked good when he was younger, before he cut his hair.

pope. - Lev Church. - Fleur has there ever been a day where you wanted your love one to leave you alone, just shut up and stop calling?

Felicion. - Lev Cruel people. - Fleur what would make you want to kill yourself?

It lay, basking in the waves about a mile from the shore just south of Mudskipper Point. I don't think you need the comma. because "It lay" isn't much of ...

Welcome! And might I just say you may want to watch your words...they're are some younger folks around! I hope you enjoy the site, its a nice place! Good luck ...

Back for a third round. But first: Good luck at the workshop, that will certainly help you. The language thing: You can want your character to seem extraordinary and intelligent, ...

I had made my way up one of hills the near our home and was now sitting on a boulder that had been in the same place for longer than ...

I'm back to actually critique! Your antique dealer sounds beautiful, but you describe him in a way that pauses the action, and it happens so quickly. You have to gracefully ...