Emerson

I have to agree with Sureal on your characters... I can quote from your story what makes them contradicting. The truth of the matter was Joy had little experience when ...

One of those out-of-magazine recipe home made dinners Fleur tends to make. As always, they look better than they taste... - Lev Same, though I do not think they taste ...

Granted. You have to be in the hospital, dying of kidney failure. I do not think that sounds too fun. I wish I could get enough points to be featured ...

Shit. Pardon my language, Will you? - Lev I keep nothing at the end of my rainbows. And in fact that is a very crazy question to ask me. Where ...

Despite the horrible lack of grammar (GASP) I liked it! I started reading merely because of the mention of Aurthur Dent. *waves towel* Thursdays confused you, they way I’d like ...

I've never gone so far as to find out. Maybe I should? - Lev I sing, but no one listens. I do not think that I am. - Fleur Haven't ...

They were pretty :-) I can't say much about them sadly. I think I liked the last one the most, those last two lines were catchy. But they were all ...

I talk normally with the same voice ever. Though it changes, when romantic I think that I whisper more but obviously when I'm angry I'm a louder person. - Lev ...

The ocean? A large, blue, thing that separates me from all other countries and hopefully from other people whom I would otherwise not like to meet. I have a gloomy ...

NaNoWriMo's pretty much gotten rid of any writer's block that might haunt me No matter how horrifying that event was for me, I still can't wait until this coming November, ...

It read beautifully! I like how you delicately and not too strongly described everything, there were no rough words or very floating comparisons, just "This is it" and I like ...

Your start could use some fixing up. It pushes to right into the action, but the whole of the first paragraph is one sentence, and not original. I've seen people ...

I like to get just enough, but end up getting much less than that. - Lev A good seven hours, but if I over sleep I'm a grouch! - Fleur ...

Hey There Flem :-) I'll have to add you on live journal, how does that sound? I hope you enjoy hanging around here, its a nice place! If you have ...

Hey there, welcome to the site! If you have any questions or just want someone to talk to, you can PM me :-) I'll have to go look for your ...