Emerson

Getting rid of aforementioned limitations, I think it'll turn into something better. Throw out word count! Throw out a need for moral! Good luck, I'll be looking forward to it.

Granted. You can draw portraits "like brad" so all your pictures look like Brad. I wish my foot didn't feel so dead/asleep.

I feel like I'm reading some kind of manual crammed into a story. Or that I should have read a manual before hand. “How can they can assume these maps ...

“Jo.Anne.” Seems like a typo Joanne, ruffled, turned on her heels and headed back out to the waiting room. The man waiting to see Dr. Graham didn’t look like a ...

Eh, again not much to say about this. 1. Where are they in the beginning? 2. The action seems to happen faster than reality permits, they get to this place, ...

It was a trait Jonathon hated in women, unless they were beautiful. With such a humorous remark as this, I'm expecting something about the girl. Was she beautiful enough/too ugly ...

*throws compliments at Brad* Nice job, I like them.

my dad got the call in St. Peter on the way to a baseball game that Grandpa has taken a turn for the worse. I think it should be "had" ...

I liked it. except the last line! For some reason it seems short and very blunt compared to the rest, so when I get to it its just like, "Oh" ...

Cleaned up as requested! Merci Beaucoup for the nice edits made :-D It might be lengthened later, but for now I'll leave it as is. I'm much too tired to ...

Hey there Mia! Welcome to our grand hang out! I'm a winner of Nanowrimo '06 as well! In fact I just got my Nano '06 T-shirt today (A late Christmas ...

I know of Cantos, but is there any word for smaller devisions like these? I figured the second was too unlike the first for them to be the same thing. ...

Hee hee hee, Fand makes me laugh. Welcome! Don't be scared by the kitty-eaters. I'm one of them too.

I'm a random friendly person! And an instructor, like Sam. Welcome, I'll be excited to see your work on here, have you or do you plan to post anything? I'd ...

I think people forget that everyone starts out bad, you don't just start at amazing. (Though wouldn't that be great?) Welcome! If you want a friendly helping or critique or ...