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yay #7! Kyle gave an innocent shrug and mouthed an apology. I had to point this out, because I liked it so much. The fact that you say he mouthed ...

Eh. Gosh, I can't believe I'm doing this... really, Looby-lou, please for give me greatly for what I am about to do because I feel bad enough as it is. ...

Hey there Lucy! I'm Claudette, and I'm an instructor, so chances are if you post something I'll eventually get around to taking a look at it. Unless its fantasy, sadly, ...

The luscious backside of my wife, and the way her curves melt together into...romance, as if it were really an object you could hold. - Lev Lev, the way he ...

Welcome!

Phorcys: Everyone. At least... I think.

My own. Should I drown myself in my own tears? Or hang myself with the hair of my ex lover? *laughs with sarcasm* - Lev Oh, I'm not sure. I ...

the poor elf just wasn't happy.... I want to see a picture of someone smashing a gift underfoot. Now THAT says adieu to Christmas!

Though I hate pushing myself into critique-driven arguments, I find myself writing a reply... No, it was not the worst thing I have ever read but I sit in agreement ...

You cheater. Granted. But the file is so corrupt that your computer lights aflame and performs the 'self destruct' that you never commanded it to. I wish I could finish ...

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temper

Granted. It's a long stretch of red ground outside of a school that goes in a circle, and if you lap it 4 times, it makes a mile. I wish ...

I've never read her poetry, but I could understand the "Depressing" comment. Read The Bell Jar . I thought it was a great book, and it makes me want to ...

Well I guess I'm happy I creeped everyone out...That seems to be the overall impression. Thanks for the critiques! I'm going to work on giving it another ten lines and ...