Emerson

Derren /3 Sorry It took me a while to get back into this! It was a crude yet simple. a what? A plan? “We are not familiar with that game ...

Chapter Three I chewed the end of my paint brush in a suggestive manner. Before me was the bare body of my wife and a canvas. Rather than painting for ...

I liked what I have read so far, and I've been meaning to catch up too...

I watched you two meet ends as you wove yourself throughout the room. I've stared her down more than enough time knows that I am on the brink of doom. ...

Brad. You are amazing. It was shocking enough when we knew she was pregnant, but when she tells kyle, its like we are hearing it for the first time! I ...

*shudders* I really liked it! Pearls....and necks... you chose very nice words!! I felt like I wanted a little more from the third and fourth stanza, but I'm not sure...what. ...

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I liked it. The meaning behind it is great. but yeah "playdough" is too silly a word for the narrator who sound so serious and stern. If you lightened up ...

'Manda! *hugs* Welcome Dahling! Yes, this is my Newbie, I call her. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me. I hope you put some of your work ...

"And," I began, hoping my hallucinations would stop, "When are the lights going to come back on?" I seem to be gifted with the power of coincidence, because the lights ...

You are reading a polish version of Lolita? Hmm... I hope its good. The whole wonder of Lolita is the way it is written, and translations always leave room for ...

You might want to mention in the title or the thread that this a tip, and not an actual question because we get so many 'how do you stop writers ...

You know, this poem has such a lovely theme. I really want to dig my fingers into it and change it up!!! But it is your poem, and your work.. ...

Chapter Two The intruding delivery men had stopped coming and our hideout was beginning to look more like a household. I feared Fleur was becoming too attached; she had already ...

So, when I hit 1k, will I be a vet too?