Emerson

I liked the theme behind it, and the way it ended. The short lines added for very quick, emotional burst. She goes, teary, to the dead castle, sees her husband, ...

to die -Lev To be happy- Fleur To achieve some goal, but that never happens - Felicion 42- me Define yourself.

Spider plant XD Fleur. Always with Fleur. We waltz in the kitchen, to the silence mingling with our heavy steps. - Lev I dance with Lev, or with Felicion. Lev ...

As many as he wants to. But only one can take him to where he wants to go. - Lev Do you reproduce asexually?

You should space out your work, to make it easier to read. Medea stood staring [s]fixedly[/s] ahead I don't like -ly words, instead, try to find a better verb than ...

None. If there were any, it would be toward my wife or for myself, for those are the only people I care about. - Lev I gave some money to ...

Sound interesting. Makes you think of opposites. Could be a drama, or a horror. Anything, really...although, maybe not a romance. I'd pick it up. Je Te Veux

I wrote ten more lines. Now how is it?

Unnoticed, blood dripped from his nose, bursting silently on the floorboards. to burst, which not only seems like the wrong verb for such a thing, and silent are too different ...

Kyle twisted around and saw Ariel standing his room. missing words. She hadn’t aged a day, sitting the bed right now. missing another word. Brad that was really, really f'ed ...

If I was a real narcissist, or perhaps if I believed in angels, I would call myself one. - Lev Felicion has fallen from his ever grace... -Fleur are you ...

What a silly question for you to ask me! No. I am innocent. No matter what you here; I have done nothing. - Lev Me? Goodness no! - Fleur Yes...But ...

Beauty sighed contentedly as she padded across the cool marble flooring of the dining hall. *shoots the -ly word* you don't need it. No matter how lively and beautiful their ...

Non at all - Lev Do you show your emotions easily?

Well: Lucy, don't beg for critiques or "bump" The nurse led Skye down the white corridor toward a room Skye always thought of as the Hello Room. When her Uncle ...