Emerson

Hee, Nice Flemzo! I...liked it but it felt sort of, too long for it to be enjoyable? Maybe thats because I always pack my poems into tight ten liners if ...

She has a case of streptococcus . LOOK! A word I've actually heard before! You know what is sad Is it took the word "Gossing" for me to realize this ...

:-D Thanks everyone. I will hack apart chapter three, and rewrite entirely (because I have a nasty hate for) Chapter two if I get the chance tomorrow while I am ...

Another creepy poem by me. Again, it starts out short. I'm not sure I can do any more to it, like I could with Child. But if someone asks.... I'll ...

I'd say were equals. He's going to win next time. He worked a lot harder than me.

:-D I won

It was...good to read, though almost too introspective. I didn't understand the last line, what is "regular"? You should read over this a few times, there are some errors and ...

Being religious, I liked the message behind it. It's a nice poem, but now I'm going to pick it a part :-D The cross is a symbol of [s]the[/s] God ...

I didn't exactly like this poem, the subject just wasn't for me, though it did remind me of Picture of Dorian Grey! This heart, beats, pulses and darkens the Painting. ...

I haven't anything to say, but, you have a way with words. I'm not sure I caught the whole idea/subject behind it, but still, it was beautiful. Your poetry sometimes ...

Merci. I'm only hoping I get more critiques on what I added...

*cough* I will admit I didn't read the last two verses, but with good reason. What you have here, is a love poem, yes? There is a certain technique to ...

I'm just going to get sick one day and die. Lack of punctuation! Punctuation & Poetry It's very nice article. I like the idea behind it, but the poem it ...

It's good, up until the last verse. I didn't like it very much, it ended too quickly. and collapse on the bench. its just so bluh for how much emotion ...

*dies a little inside* May I guide you to look at an article for me? Poetry & Punctuation . Read it, study it, learn it, use it. This was very ...