Emerson

Seeing my precious darling, Fleur, in the arms of any other man. Even if its her brother—no, especially if its Felicion. - Lev Violence. - Fleur To hear that, again, ...

Thanks Chandni :-D It was funny to you? O.o And, since you mentioned Lev and Fleur, that makes me think of Felicion and Fleur *giggles* I'm still working on that ...

Thanks for the Critiques :-D More are always welcomed.

*Screams* BRAD I HATE YOU SO MUCH! But I love Ch so much... *melts with love* wtf? She wants to have the fear of snow? *screws up eyes* I hate ...

Thank you Snoinkums I eat up your critique, 5 points and all. Yum Yum Yum. :-D I'm hoping to write Chapter Four tomorrow. If not, Hopefully I'll have done some ...

Granted. But its being mobbed and burned by abortion supporters. I wish I had more time.

Lev quickly realizes that it must be an hallucination. He must have been drugged by a prostitute, or worse yet, by an enemy. Scenario: The police just pulled you over. ...

I liked the examples the most. Jimbolina is such a weird name. Very good article! I'll think of it when ever I'm writing dialog :-D

Welcome! Everyones already done their respective "Pm me if you want help" so I won't :-D Hope you have a nice time here!

Welcome! Everyone has already done the if you need help pm me thing, so I won't. Sally is such a pretty name! You can call me Clau or Claud(e) or ...

This was really powerful, I liked reading it. Just like crysi said, very well written. An fading flower-patterned couch groaned as I leaned against it. that 'an' should be 'a' ...

The subject matter is fleeting. What are you writing about? It's really hard to say. the first two stanzas seem like one thing, then the rest of the poem, something ...

I liked it. Didn't understand the last line (the one apart from the stanza) Also you should capitalize Convinced and If since they are starts of new sentences. it's the ...

You might want to check out this article: Poetry & Punctuation . Another thing, its common to capitalize the first letter of the first word in each new line. The ...

I don't think I have one. I don't listen to music. - Lev Word Associations: months