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Re: Proof Reading
Well, our eyes are sometimes built that way too. Reading over something familiar makes it harder for us to spot the errors. We might have the word "on" written, but ...
Jan 25, 2007 -
Re: explanation for my abscence
I never knew you much! But nice to have you back. (In fact, I think we don't know each other at all.) You are probably still a mod, but the ...
Jan 25, 2007 -
Re: Now or Never
Hello there Beckie, We spoke in the chat before :-) Has this great novel of yours been through rewrites and editing? That is always the hardest part of writing novels, ...
Jan 25, 2007 -
Re: Nameless Lover
Merci Chandni! I've agreed with both points that the rhyming and the French were bad. But I think I'll go with Colleen's word and come back to the general theme ...
Jan 24, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
No, the dark does not scare me. - Lev I am not scared of the dark, but there are other things I'm scared of. Silence, and loud noises; both creating ...
Jan 24, 2007 -
Re: Nameless Lover
Thanks Colleen! Yes, I actually hate this poem the most out of anything I've written. It's ugly and I put no effort into it. I think it was more that ...
Jan 24, 2007 -
Re: Good Bye, Jacen.
This... Isn't much poetry. I am left only to assume you are new to poetry? I have several suggestions for new poets: 1. Read poetry. Read it like if you ...
Jan 24, 2007 -
Re: Nameless Lover
I hardly think this is the best poem I've written, in fact I wouldn't be hurt if some said it was the worst. I might also have been navel gazing. ...
Jan 24, 2007 -
Re: The Question of Fragments
Fragments are apart of style, is how I take it. I like my long, comma filled sentences but at times the briefness of fragments are needed. It gives a sort ...
Jan 24, 2007 -
Re: Keeping Your Readers Rooting For Your Characters
Procrastinate writing and go read more books! For some reason I am reminded of Nanowrimo....ha ha ha. But I don't think my readers are rooting for my MC; in fact ...
Jan 24, 2007 -
Re: Untitled (Verboten)
I've always liked how your poetry feels (or rather reads) so abstract but if I go over a few more times, really take it in, and I can find a ...
Jan 23, 2007 -
Re: YWS Handout Flyers
I think I'll take some to my school library... Maybe even the local library, though They hate me there... *growls at librarians*
Jan 23, 2007 -
Re: YWS Was Down For One Hour
:happiness: I have a Jr. mod color now! yay! Though I don't think my powers have been set up..ohs wells. This is still pretty cool. And we all know Nate ...
Jan 23, 2007 -
Re: Proof Reading
*grins* Thanks for that notice, Trident. I often screw up quite, quiet, and quit for some reason when I am typing, and its not something my eyes pick up.
Jan 22, 2007 -
Re: Proof Reading
The Importance of Proof Reading By: Claudette This is something that a lot of newer members tend not to pay attention to. But it’s something that I take quite seriously! ...
Jan 22, 2007
