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Re: Questions about Punctuation?
So, I'm writing my essay. And I never know what kind of dashes are supposed to be in numbers. How would you punctuation this sentence? At the time of their ...
Jan 28, 2007 -
Re: As the Sun Rises
Good job for trying! But, you still need helpful shoves in the right direction. What feeling am I supposed to be taking away from this? What am I getting out ...
Jan 28, 2007 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here (4)
Your beauty angers me. I'm a mass of ugly and you are so pretty! awesome pictures, hair, eyes. You pretty person!
Jan 28, 2007 -
Re: Questions
So you wrote a poem about...star wars? *is very confused* As a poem it is a...bad poem. People read poetry in hopes of being able to take away some emotion, ...
Jan 27, 2007 -
Re: question
I'll elaborate on what Clouds said. There is no set "page number" for a chapter. Chapters start and end when it seems the right place. Like, you wouldn't end a ...
Jan 26, 2007 -
Re: Innocent
I liked it, it seemed to flow nicely. One thing I didn't like, it just didn't seem to flow well within the poem, was the transition from describing the looks ...
Jan 26, 2007 -
Re: Laudanum
I loved reading it. I can't give as many words as Collen did, though. I picked up the Victorian sense, and I've always loved things like that. I'd go through ...
Jan 26, 2007 -
Re: Signet Classics: Full of Typos?
Ack, Myth! Yes. I spell horrible. I wonder why Mozilla spell check didn't find this? Cheep must be a word too... I was real tempted to write in the margins, ...
Jan 26, 2007 -
Re: Introductory thing stuff
the greatest love of all is the acceptance of others bathroom habits, or changing of ones own to suit another. This, and what followed, sounded so thoughtful! Though we've already ...
Jan 26, 2007 -
Re: Chionophobia #23 (Encore) /P
Perhaps I am only your error catcher? ‘Try me.” single quote instead of double quote. curling his lip and flaring his nostrils as he did so. I don't like how ...
Jan 26, 2007 -
Re: Signet Classics: Full of Typos?
I've been reading Camille by Alexandre Dumas Fils . I's published by signet classic, and is riddled with typos! I'm sickened by it. I'm wondering if this is why the ...
Jan 25, 2007 -
Re: Together Forever My Love
Todether Forever My Love I typoe in your title? I'm guessing so. I wont let go, neither will you. won't is a contraction, and so, it needs an appostrofy. I ...
Jan 25, 2007 -
Re: Anatomy of Love's First Kiss
I liked it but... I'm left without something. Maybe its because it was so short, as it is a haiku. It is good, most certainly it is good! But I ...
Jan 25, 2007 -
Re: What are you reading at the moment?
It would be in technicality, a re-read. The Brothers Karamazov by Fyodor Dostoyevksy Oh My, my, Didn't make my way too far through that. My reading level isn't up enough ...
Jan 25, 2007 -
Re: Super Awesome Icons
I liked 'em, but I think I'm on the side of you shouldn't have taken others, even if you are only compiling them for others use and probably didn't credit ...
Jan 25, 2007
