Emerson

Welcome! Kafka you say? *rolls in excitement* I love Kafka :-D I'd really like to see your work, if you say you reflect his style. Though that isn't always a ...

or are in dire need of a critique on some piece of writing. ^_^ So are you handing all the mods out for critiques, Imp? lol Hi Andy! Great to ...

I liked it. But I still wants some hearts or something for Valentines day!

It was good. Of course, I would have to reread it a few times to get what was actually being said, because the phrases used were so long. But thats ...

I'm not going to agree or disagree with anyone above; I'm going to make my own critique. *sigh* No arguing over critiques people, come on! It'll only annoy the Writer. ...

The background should be composed of some combination of Bananas and Snakes. *Cannot resist* Snakes on a Banana?

Finally, for my critique! Yes, please do work on the punctuation. And, what is the point? Might I ask. This verges close to the usual teen love poetry, but in ...

February is coming up... Hearts! Lots and lots of hearts! :-) hee hee. Or cupid and his arrow? I love how the backgrounds are so seasonal.

This is a very small snippet of something much longer, I hope... You are missing the beginning punctuation mark for 'close your eyes'. The title is 'vampires' but other than ...

I'd love to critique your poem right now; but I'm loaded with homework. You said you wanted punctuation help? I wrote an article on Poetry & Punctuation that might help ...

What was the point? In some points it was...interesting. I liked some of the technique, like here: with him i am quixotic, neurotic, lethargic, euphoric. But it doesn't follow much ...

I'm all on your side :-) I'm poetic (And I don't even completly agree with that) but I need to work on my ideas. I need to find a better ...

See, I knew there was some crazy something behind numbers and punctuation.... Thanks Backo Scocko!

I love the dark shading. There isn't any Grey, really, its just a light brown. It makes it look really pretty.

I got the first part, thanks! but isn't there some funky way to punctuate numbers, with dashes and stuff? Or was I dreaming? I would be tempted to put yours ...