Emerson

Hello! “No, but thank you,” he smiles. Since you can't smile words out of your mouth, that's not a dialogue tag. I twist my ring around on my finger [s]nervously[/s] ...

Hullo, hullo, hullo! I'm not sure what anyone else has said, so hopefully I don't go repeating others foolishly. You obviously have something emotional you're writing about, which is a ...

Hello! So, if I am understanding things rightly, this is about someone and his writing? I'm not sure I understand it correctly at all, so if this review seems to ...

My, my human sexuality! How interesting. Your genre of choice also sounds interesting. I'll have to keep on eye on you. Anyway, hullo and howdeedo! Hope you enjoy the forum, ...

Hello! How are you? And, of course, welcome to the YWS! So, I would suppose you write? What is your genre of choice - poetry, fiction, nonficton, grocery lists? I ...

Is this an unfinished post or question? Writing in omniscient point of view is easy to begin with: you use third person (he, she, it, they) and you can see ...

Woo! ^_^ I'm proud of our members.

This thread got bumped. *giggles* One big and confusing word: Neurolinguistics.

The 1-10 thing hurt my head a little. But I have taken it now. :)

Hello! First I'd like to let you know I removed your name from the end of the poem. I wasn't certain that was your actual name, but of well. If ...

I skimmed through a few of the top pieces, and I honestly didn't find them to be that amazing. Granted, the summaries of a few sounded amazing, but the writing ...

On the one hand that sounds amazing, but on the other it sounds frightening. I've always been terrified of communities like that. YWS is one thing, but something owned by ...

I would say anywhere between 15k-80k, which I guess is kind of far out because 80k is a lot, but when you consider that a lot of novels published now ...

Hey there! I wanted to let you know I modified your post to remove so many ````` marks. If you make your page break too long, it stretches out the ...

Hehe, I can only echo Pen on the punctuation front. I would say it isn't always necessary, but here it makes it a bit muddled to read without the punctuation ...