Emerson

My try at poetry in the cinquain form. The two are separate, but I figured I'd put them in the same thread since they were of the same style. The ...

It was good, it had a good feel and a good flow. Though some lines were too long, and others too short. If I had one thing to say about ...

i liked the now-and-then hard-to-catch rhyming. I forget what the exact word is for how you did it—Rhyming by sound rather than by letters, and such. My biggest complaint is ...

*dies* You know how much I've been waiting to see some Kyle and Jon action! Woo! I got my fill! Though at the whole Jon-Kyle-Asher-Ariel scene when they were, I ...

he told himself it was what Kyle would have done. Always. Though they hate each other so much, hurt each other so much, they always love each other, don't they? ...

She was cold, and he was desperate—oil and water. You couldn't write a line better. Every word barked out with a broken anger I think the 'a' should be taken ...

I've returned :-P And to what? To only be the proof reader and complimenter, I'm sure. “It isn’t you fault, you know.” Your fault. Thats all I caught. Really, it ...

First of all, no one really likes to read anything you "Just wrote." Give it a title, otherwise we'll start thinking you put no effort into what you are posting... ...

10/10 because ice cream IS very close to happiness.

I'm not sure of the longest. But if you've heard, and I think many did, of the ice storm that hit the Midwest (AKA Missouri, where I live) in December? ...

I'm...not compeltely sure this is the place for questions like these—More like writing tips or something. I'd like it if it was science fiction, AS IN you knew a lot ...

I liked the theme behind it, but it was too short and structureless for my taste. BUT, I'm nuts about structure, so that does not mean its bad. But I ...

welcome, welcome! If you have any questions, need some help, or want a critique (Though honestly, I probably am not the one to critique fantasy.....) feel free to PM me ...

"I believe your a reporter [comma Mr. Dolly", his voice was crisp, and his words deliberate. He had planned this moment for so long- every minute was scripted. " You ...

well... Mr. Everyone didn't go get you links, but I will. Link One Link Two Link Three Hope those work for you!