Emerson

She's a good teacher but I still feel kind of above the majority of the class....I wish we had advanced English, though. Next year I can take AP (Advanced Placement ...

Bienvenue. monkeys smells funny, like feces. But that doesn't mean you do! Have fun, eh?

It was...interesting I suppose? Lacked the capitalization of "I" I think it had some spelling errors, had no general form and was very... unusual. The only part of the poem ...

Bienvenue!

I liked this :-D keep your headache in the bottle, I really like this line here. The ending was what made it best for me, it was nice and well ...

Merci everyone, yes, I certainly like the less strict poem one, and I really love this form. Maybe I'll write a few more like the first. I liked that one ...

Deader than I could ever be I don't think deader is a word. More dead? Thou no crime has been committed Bad word usage... The word should be "Though" Thou ...

By the way, my name’s Johanna Pearl. I’d love to tell you that I’m tall, with strawberry-blond hair and a body that Paris Hilton would envy. Don't write this like ...

New perspectives are always interesting to look at! Though I do have complaints. I assume that the repetition of lines was either to show insanity or disorder? I figure disorder, ...

I figured I'd read this in connection to Ch. wow. Blew me away. The metaphor of a magician and how we loose things in life really gripped me. This poem ...

So, was he bleeding with the cuts (and when had it happened?) or were these older wounds? I assume he had gone to their bedroom, cut, and then came out? ...

Thanks all! Colleen — I edited it with your comments in mind. I'd explain "Beauty" to you, but if it needs explaining then it must not be a very good ...

Welcome Welcome. Hope you have a fun, nice time here. If you have any questions, need some help, or want a critique feel free to PM me and I'll do ...

Welcome Welcome! If you have any questions, need help around the site, want a critique, or pretty much anything, you can Pm me and I'll see what I can do. ...

I have two notes on general posting. 1. Don't include polls in your poetry/fiction threads, people are going to tell you there opinions through posting, not through polls. 2. I ...