Emerson

I wouldn't say that the English language is dying, Grammar is dying. But not really, we're just full of (America, mind you all, is what I am speaking of) lazy ...

I have read none of them XD Does that mean something is wrong with me? I hope not.

I think a lot has been said, and though I haven't read all that has been said, I'm sure it would cover anything I have to say, other than this: ...

[This is too funny, Lev is Russian!] "Вы говорите на русском языке?" Lev asked. or... "Vy govorite na russkom yazyke?" Lev asked. Scenario: Your character can only speak in sig

Sounds...weird. I'd pick it up depending on the cover. It feels so much like the middle of a sentence. An Actor is Never Honest

Yes, but only because I am prone to defending myself. Not to say that I fought back in retaliation of someone else's actions, but if someone is insulting you, you ...

Nate and a Chimp! Or a Monkey. Is there much difference between the two? That would be a nice couple/threesome. Brad and the creepy dude that was watching his TV ...

I really enjoyed this! It was so helpful, most on the POV part because I've been thinking over POV changes for my novel, and whether I can actually achieve this ...

the fact that the "Is Him" line was so much shorter than the others was rather irritating for me, not to mention that you rhymed "him" with "in" so the ...

Bienvenue! Hope to see some work by you :-D

I don't think this goes here, so I'm moving it to the research section...

I love reading, and rereading your poetry. It always takes me a few minutes to really pick up the actions, pick up the meanings. But with your poetry I think ...

I'm surprised at the way I continually end up getting critiques on this, one way or another, even though I posted it two months or so ago... It must be ...

I give myself a break. I've gotten pretty dang far for how long I've been here!

Parallel means to me two opposing sides, or opposites. You already know what I think of the word 'rebellions' but in this case it makes me think of two people ...