Emerson

Well first off, this was a filler chapter, wasn't it? Wasn't all that exciting, since no one cares about Sarah. But hey it's CH I don't care. Other than that ...

This is the end of the beginning. (wtf?)

This would give me something to work for. And I think it would be cute if they were mascot themed, but why this one and not all the others? The ...

Don't worry, your not the only one. A lot of new folks worry about this :-D You can either assume we are all very nice people (Which I think we ...

Bonjour et Bienvenue Mike! If you need some help around the site, have questions, or would like a critique feel free to PM me :-D Hope you enjoy YWS!

obviously enough, it sounds Fantasy. But it's rather vague.. I wouldn't pick it up, simply because I don't read fantasy, but I think It could have a pretty cool cover ...

Bienvenue et Bonjour! Yes, I'd also like to know, what do you write? Or should I take a look at your biography for such things? If you have any questions, ...

Even you mentioned Romeo and Juliet. I'm curious: you said it was for your English class, were you supposed to write a poem relating to Romeo and Juliet? Because the ...

It looks so mean, and so cool, it gets a 10/10. It's pretty spiffy Jack :-)

[that was so a typo on my part, at least I think?] Sounds interesting. Although, almost like a rock band. I really have no good titles, so I'll randomly make ...

I'm such a proof reader! I feel so misused... Why he chose to spoke to you is a surprise to us all.” to speak. *claps* So, yeah, it was worth ...

Had Kyle even loved Jonathon? Eh. Can I say cut this out? I realize you are following Jon's narrative but I don't think it feels very Ch. Maybe I'm wrong. ...

He doesn't l—need me." Er. What? "Good boy," purred Kyle, swiping his tongue over the curve of Michael's ear and leaning back. Micheal? Mind explaining? Dean caught it and grabbed ...

bienvenue et bonjour! So fantasy and sci-fi? That's exciting. Who are your favorite authors? Any Verne there? If you have any questions or need help around the site feel free ...

Iron horses race down florescent tunnels, you sit, diverting your eyes to watch the flicker of harnessed electricity spark into an intangible streak, and here I think you need to ...