Emerson

he caught Jon's eyes and held it I think you should change it to stare. Or, if you don't make it "He caught Jon's eyes and held them " which ...

It was rather close. Someone what surprising. Now that we have a mascot....what does it do? (Do we get YWS monkey T-shirts?!)

Anna seems like a Mexican name to me, though it isn't as far as I know. I see a little girl, tan with dark short hair. Shy. Vera

Unlike 'Genah and the several others who speak Spanish, I speak French. But I respect your want to learn English a lot! I'm in love with languages :-) I hope ...

You'd think there would be a conventional way to do these kinds of things, but there never are, and that is half the fun. No matter how you set it ...

Jack could never go at anyone :-) Yeah... I mean the one thing this site should most be concerned with when it comes to copyright and publishing, is first publishing ...

Bonjour et bienvenue. Any friend of Fands is somehow an automatic friend of mine. Not exactly sure why, haven't seen anything of Fand in a while! *waves to Fand is ...

Nearly finished with Salomé by Oscar Wilde. I've been reading a collection of his plays. To follow it, The Plague by Camus. I read half way through it a while ...

I enjoyed it, though I'm trying to pick out its incest...I see it, slightly, but barely. Though, I struggle to understand things like this. What struck me the most was ...

I do not tell anyone my secrets, else they would not be secrets, would they? - Lev I wish not to speak of them... - Fleur I have too many ...

Kit, you are too overwhelmingly smart for me :-) Now I know what it really is, Danka!

Why is there a little girl outside at a play ground in the middle of the night!? It started out good, and I thought I would like it but then ...

I've only heard of this method twice, I think, and the second time from Grif. (I'm wondering if he has anything to say about this?) I really think unless you ...

The Lord purifies demons, sending them back to Hell. if he purified them, why is he sending them to hell? I like the idea behind it, though really it is ...

I think the above caught some stuff I wished to point out... you should read over it a little, there are several verbs out of the right tense. You have ...