Emerson

Hey there! I'd say the biggest problem I have with your poem is that your subject is a little strange and you kind of go in a weird direction. I ...

[ A/N: I just wanted to say thank you to everyone who has been reading and reviewing this for me! Even if you're just reading this sans review, I still ...

If you want to discuss it, I'd love to. :D I haven't read the book in a year, but I remember it pretty well, and I have mine with notes ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! I'd love to say I'd read your work, but I don't do much in fantasy. ^_~ In any case, I hope you enjoy the site! ...

What once was, now is not. A heart left bleeding[s], bleeding,[/s] to rot. I can't say I hate this. It makes me think of the Imagists movement with Ezra Pound ...

Just because their purpose is to die doesn't mean they can't suffer when they're alive. Really amusing typo. ^_^ I'm not saying I'm against free range, I just don't care. ...

I think the point is they are bred to be eaten. We are not. Exactly. I'm not sure you guys understood my point, and maybe that was my fault for ...

Hey there! Here to deliver my review as promised. The biggest issue in this poem, I found, is that you're talking to someone and about something that I, the reader, ...

I'll probably get killed for this: but why does it matter how the animals are being treated if they're going to die anyway? Yeah, that is horrible. But I am ...

Aline had slit her wrists on Friday. The doctors were releasing her today. In all, she had spent three nights in the hospital, meaning that today was Monday. As soon ...

Hullo, hullo, hullo! The hall was decorated extravagantly. Its ivory walls were spotted with banal paintings of faces and wildflowers, velvet streamers hung from the ceiling, and all around shelves ...

Gyr!!! Hi! *hugs* ^_^ I miiiiiissed you.

Hey there, and welcome to YWS! Just something you might want to consider: posting something this long will make it harder for you to get reviews. Perhaps if you break ...

Demeter: You have some amazingly blue eyes!!

I'm so glad Clo and I agree so warmly. ^_^ Even though this is kind of a random tangent, I feel like talking about it. >_> Forgive me? This isn't ...