Emerson

Bonjour et Bienvenue :-) This place is awesome to share your work, we have so many good writers and critics out there! The whole site in general is a really ...

I'm here! *falls into Sam's arms* Er... to critique! Yes... XP he’d say, magically pulling a sabre from its invisible sheath at its side. Should that be "his"? At a ...

Jon watched Kyle walk into the bathroom and pull the door to. what's with you and not finishing your sentences lately? "I just feel like one of those pathetic character ...

Jonathon dropped his hands to his side and stood under the bright fluorescent lights. [s]The[/s] very interesting "the" "See? None of that. No jokes. If I bare my soul to ...

Jon straddled him and put his hand over his Kyle's forehead, feeling for fever. odd. Kyle, I need you let go of me. For just a second, okay?" You're missing ...

Lips and Knees? Were you feeling to shy to say anything else? Is this some reference to something because otherwise knees aren't all that attractive. (Mine aren't.) "What did she ...

Oh, I'm scared of it too, just rather daring. I have no ideas though... and haven't read the book XD so I have no clue how to do it "good".

UPDATE: I think it's funny I only have 4 posts and am all the way at the bottom... so I'm updating this. Poetry comes when it wants to, I have ...

I wouldn't be in much of a mood to answer to either of them, "Did you kill [insert the name of who they think I have killed this time, here]?" ...

I reeeeeeaaaally hated "The Great Gatsby." It just seemed so pointless and, well, bad, I don't care who you are. Ah, these things are all in opinion, aren't they? The ...

I wouldn't talk to a strange unless they paid me money or were trying to 'take advantage of me', to put it kindly. Though I doubt anyone taking advantage of ...

Why? I don't differentiate the two. They are there for a reason, are they not? And you shouldn't label people as either, unless they have stated themselves that they are ...

They're very cute, and childish ;-) I love them. But your all too noticeable lack of dialog hurts them. Punctuate :-D I know you know better than this! Oh: and ...

granted, Claudette somehow manages to be less confusing O.o I wish I knew the meaning back ups....

Granted, YWS breaks so you can't log onto it. I wish I was concentrating as well as Dreamer can, with YWS broke.