Emerson

and lightly tipped over the open wound. tipped it over...? water streaming down his face. water=tears? if so, say tears. it sounds weird. Why had chosen to stay home this ...

Oh wow, it is all too early in the year to be thinking about November, isn't it? And yet, the very day of December first I wanted the year to ...

I forget how much I edited of Chapter five. You all must keep in mind I have lost almost all will and want. -- Chapter Six Alexei stood outside the ...

Thanks :-) I'll edit as soon as my laziness goes away. And, actually, I have written a few things of fantasy before I came here, I keep convincing myself to ...

You can get ideas for your novels and things here, yes. We can help you with your ideas, and develop them. Though, this isn't the exact forum for it :-D ...

Wasn't oh-so-bad. Some things a little cliche, like stopping something in its tracks and "liquid crystal". But something major: take out the emoticon. It's poetry, we already get the sadness ...

ah you are looking for similarities, well, it is really easy to do that one. What are all those books? Best sellers. Even look outside of YA (I don't know ...

Well, it is all in opinion and preference, to get right down to it. It isn't what is in the book but what you like in a book, and this ...

Hey Ellen :-D You sound like a really active person, lol. Do you ever have problems with people's views and your lesbian fiction? I'm just curious, because you say you ...

I think ofour covered the grammar that you neglected :-) The story is an amazing work in the making honestly . You have the ability, just not the...I'm not sure ...

coffee - Lev Both- Fleur Neither. - Felicion Word association: cuff

France opens secret UFO files covering 50 years by Marlowe Hood Thu Mar 22, 11:53 AM ET PARIS (AFP) - France became the first country to open its files on ...

Alright, edited. You might mention how he's doing these things--with his mind alone? Is he gesturing at all, like a pupeteer might? I didn't do this, only because I'm not ...

He had already looked at all of them twice before, and Kyle could still feel Jonathon's glare from two hours ago. the way kyle and jon are mentioned in this ...

This isn't so bad! Give yourself a break. There are some general script writing things I want to fix, and some writing things I want to fix. I'll use this ...