Emerson

Sounds like some pop-lit [think of the paper back best sellers.]! or chick-lit [paper back best sellers, again, only with women as an audience (maybe gay men too? I dunno.)]. ...

No, that is why I have a wife. - Lev To follow what he said: yes. - Fleur Do you know any one with cancer?

When I see it I want to say, "adalay" but...that's not it, lol. I can't exactly figure out how to say it. Add-lie? add-lay? It's a cute name just... hard ...

The try/cry/lie/die rhyming got a little wearisome in the fourth line. But, despite that, I think your fourth and fifth line go together well. I'm not entirely sure what the ...

I don't exactly see suicide as a means of escape. Why ruin your own life? Someone else is always the root of your problem, and if you have caused all ...

Btw, in your siggy, the first 'to' should be a 'too'. Jenna, I never knew you were a grammar Nazi :lol: Anyhow, Bonjour et Bienvenue! I hope you've enjoyed the ...

Sounds like some weird book either about flowers, candy, or love making. XP The story of two actors falling in love while playing Romeo & Juliet. It's a cute, fluffy ...

Steam punk is fun to read ^_^ Do you read any of it? That's basically all I ever read for scifi anyway, I've always had a thing for Jules Verne ...

I think Darkness Rising is an old (or new?) horror movie so... I automatically don't suggest it. But, it sounds rather creepy. Could make for a very interesting book, had ...

Oh, wow I love that name. I almost want to steal it form you and use it for one of my future characters. The "Tati" sound is so beautiful, and ...

Wow, I really love this! The voice you used made it very beautiful. I think some lines could be changed, some grammar/punctuation could be fixed up. Otherwise, C'est bon :-) ...

Eh, I didn't get through all of it, honestly. I couldn't connect with it, it was just a continuous flow and didn't seem very poetic, IMHO. It was emotional, but ...

er... No, I didn't read it. But with good reason, I'll explain. 1. I don't like long poetry. But there is an explanation behind this. I don't like long poetry ...

It's a good idea for a poem, but the poem its self could use some fixing up. It had a slow pace, it felt bogged down my too many words, ...

All but the last stanza was good. You had a rhyming pattern, and then it went out the window. The meaning behind it is great, though not original, but you ...