Emerson

Genuine grief? I can't think of one, in all honest. Perhaps I am not trying hard enough. - Lev I can only say times, I have been forced to handle ...

As far as the situation calls for. Otherwise, I don't exert myself too much. - Lev I run only when chased. I wouldn't know. I've never been stalked. - Fleur ...

Art, and my wife. I would give up my art. My wife is art. - Lev I'm not sure how to answer that...- Fleur What is death to you?

Scene: A baby clothes shop, filled with mostly women. KYLE is shopping like he may be on crack, and JON is following carelessly JON: So, Why are we shopping for ...

I agree with adding some punctuation, I think a colon should be placed after "Invisibility". I didn't mind the repetition of Invisibility, but "The cloak of humility" did get to ...

No, sorry dear, I didn't read it :-) But I thought I would suggest something for you. But yes where are the puntuations? She's right, you really should punctuate your ...

Okay, erm, first off, don't "bump" your threads or beg for replies, it will only get you a better chance of being ignored. like ofour said, you need a comma ...

Some of it should be fixed up... You over used commas, to the max. Look at it as sentences, and punctuation it. ( Poetry & Punctuation ) Some lines just ...

The one major thing the was obstructing my enjoyment was the punctuation. wowie, like commas, eh? Are those memories as close to you, [nothing] As they are to me, [?] ...

Though it was rather... high strung with emotions, the way it was short and the way it flowed captured me. Some lines I didn't like, but... over all, it was ...

You didn't capitalize anything, and it was barely punctuated, making this...not even a real sentence, or one full sentence maybe. You should fix that; just because it is a poem ...

I'm glad I could write something cute :-) I'm not much for haiku either... Thanks everyone for the compliments!!

Sounds like Fabio. Wasn't he some guy who did posses for romance novels? So think of some rather build, beautiful man with long hair. But he's really gay, so the ...

Never when learning, but with my memories that come more as words. I hear them spoken. - Lev I ignore the past, and I forget what I have been taught. ...

Makes me think of those books I think they were called redwall? It would be too fantasy for me to pick up, and even if it wasn't I'd automatically assume ...