Emerson

Pardon? My...what? Crazy woman. That's who you are. - Lev If you had to classify yourself into some scientific classification (of your choosing) what would you be? (Cal> That is ...

Bonjour et Bienvenue Mlle F. (I dare not try to spell it X_X) Hope you enjoy YWS. If you have any questions, want to chat, or want a friendly critique, ...

Bonjour et bienvenue Mlle. Chelsea! Best of luck to not getting baned here :lol: I'm sure this has been said: If you need any help, want a friendly critique, or ...

Adam mentioned typo stuff. (You licked Jack again...) You should consider writing narration for documentary shows. I have two things I'd like to say about these new style chapters you've ...

*glee* aw this makes me want to finish Ch. Even more....*pouts* Nobody thought John Wayne Gacy was capable of raping and murdering thirty-three boys. I remember you taling to me ...

Wow... incredibly violent, psychotic, and twisted. You have such a skill for writing, really. The whole entire time I am going through exactly what Jon is going through, but in ...

Can I say what I usually say? WTF. haha. But either way, this was awesome. WOW. You should have yelled at me for getting behind in this! You are amazing; ...

I'm sad I got lazy and missed this... Dang, I am SO far behind. Think I could catch up in one night? XD That was really good. I want to ...

Glad to see I could make people laugh :-D I was really hoping to write part 0.02, but I kind of jumped ship with a lot of things I was ...

The way it jumped right in with the description of Franz (Which makes me think of Kafka...) was really...catching, and I liked it that way. It completely grabbed me by ...

Following Jenna's lead about titles, I'm starting a thread to get feedback on your first paragraph. Isn't that also something really important? It can make/break someones impression of the book. ...

Bless and broken sound good together, for obvious reasons. Its kind of saying do good to the bad person? But metaphorically. Doesn't really tell me anything about the story, but ...

I think my readers get it, because when I changed the POV everyone said it worked out nicely. Though with the one chapter that was in third person, I did ...

I went nuts and started doing To Keep No Secrets in more than one POV. Not only that, it's in first. And then there is one chapter (and probably more ...

Bonjour et bienvenue! If you need any help, or a friendly critique, I'll do my best :-D Hope you enjoy the site!