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Re: What are you reading at the moment?
Is it just me, or has YWS gone on a little Russian craze lately, lol? I wouldn't doubt it... I'm reading If on a Winter's Night a Traveler by Italo ...
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Re: Keeping books in good condition?
A good way to keep them from getting any dirtier would be to make them new covers out of heavy paper. It's fun, plus then you can decorate it. Amazing ...
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Re: Title Feedback
Brown bananas= rotten! Yellow bags? Well first off I think of le boƮte au lettre , because the mail boxes in France are all yellow, so says my book. Yellow ...
Apr 3, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
Makes me think of teen/chick-lit. (otherwise known as young adult specifically for girls, like The Traveling Pants.) and this stacy girl is pop-u-lar! Everyone wants to be here, so she ...
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Re: First Paragraph Feedback
Its very....jumpy. One thing after another, and I have no idea what is going on. I almost think it is jumbled too. She shouts a lot, there is a lot ...
Apr 3, 2007 -
Re: Keeping books in good condition?
Thanks, both of you. Sureal> I really wish I would have thought of that before now... It wouldn't be so depressing :-( I guess from now on I'll do that ...
Apr 3, 2007 -
Re: Keeping books in good condition?
As usual, I'm unsure where this goes. I'm having a problem, and it's really making me mad. I figured some wonderful person out there could help me. I tend to ...
Apr 3, 2007 -
Re: Monster.
Told ya I'd get around to it :-D Just took me a while. To remind himself, he [s]realised[/s] realized suddenly. To remember. [Comment on the spelling change: this may be ...
Apr 3, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
Sounds childlike. Or perhaps it is a science manual set up in an unusual way? Impulse: Accepted
Apr 3, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
Reminds me of viruses, or dying babies. (How morbid?) The word failure is so harsh, and cold, than something like "inability" or "not" even. Thrive is an amazing word. It's ...
Apr 3, 2007 -
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[s]Reminds me of Who stole my cheese? purely because of its food connection. Probably wouldn't pick it up; too foolish. Might be a children's book, or something.[/s] Darn, I was ...
Apr 3, 2007 -
Re: and i move through this masquerade
Mad made several good points. Though, should not you capitalize 'I' the pronoun? And I do find the spacing for 'who am I and who are you' obscure. Not to ...
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
(Oh darn. I meant pair. I hate my spelling) I like the double entendre of the word "grave". Is she grave=sad, grave=ill, grave=...grave. xD Its unique in that form. And, ...
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
Too long...Though interesting enough. It makes me wonder, and that is enough to make me look at it long enough to wonder some more, and pick it up, and read ...
Apr 2, 2007 -
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Very comical, although much too long. It could be condensed, or rather, set up differnetly. Questions from sidekicks: If I can blow up the world, why am I doing batman's ...
Apr 2, 2007
